All Comments on 'Talon Ch. 03'

Very awesome story, can't wait for the next chapter

this is an awesome story I cannot wait to read the rest....keep it cummming

I soo love this story!! I hope you are able to post ther next chapter very soon. Keep writing! It's sooo good. I love wolves stories. Please, please post the next one very soon.-Bookietwo

very Hot!!! one of the best nonhuman story here on Lit. Please continue!, can't wait for the next one^^

wow great story so far I do hope you finish it soon i would love to find out what happens next and how things end.

just a throw in the dark here is rick gay or somin cause if all matings are lik that he must be

I know that this is an older story, but I really enjoy reading it. I hope that you haven't totally given up on writing it. After all, this is only the beginning! Just wanted you to know that people are still interested in this story.

Ooooooooooh I loved it please keep on writing more.

I just found this and fell absolutely in love with it. I know its been awhile, but please continue with it.

I loved these stories... please continue writing them. I would love it if you would post Ricks stories as well.

Bev

I hope you haven't given up. I so love the story line!

This is a wonderful story and I can't wait for the rest and to find out about Rick....Keep up the great work!!!

This is one of the best stories of this type that I have ever feasted my eyes on. Believe me I have seen a few. lol

a few rough spots but nothing that a good edit couldn't weed out. Keep writing.

I hope you will continue this series and bring Rick into the picture soon. A great werewolf saga is hard to come by these days. Wolfmann

the last time u wrote somthing was back i 08 nov 5 so what happen to the storey of rick have you for gotten no let me guess school rite or is it your family that has you stuck with writers block

I absolutely love this. One of my favorites