All Comments on 'Tammi's Big Day Ch. 01'

loved it ...keep more chapters coming..can't wait

This was terrible! You use the present tense when you should use the past; you use apostrophes when you merely want top form a plural; you type the wrong letter and don't correct it (his breath was "rusting" from his lungs instead of "rushing". You insult your readers by not bothering to read your work before you submit it. If your knowledge of English is not up to publication standard (as it appears) then find someone to edit your work!

If you don't have 'spell check' on your computer, you DEFINATELY NEED TO GET IT!!!