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You are prolific but the majority of your stuff, like this one, are just badly written crap.

Amazing, it's been six years and nobody has bothered to correct the idiotic comment fro that most prolific of all commenters, namely Anonymous? This is, of course, a wonderful story about how a 15-year-old boy barely failed to lay a remarkable easy young woman of 19 years of age, or so. It's easy to imagine it's a glimpse into reality, in some sense, and very well written. 5*