All Comments on 'Tawny Ch. 02'

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jsmangisjsmangisalmost 7 years ago
Let an Electrician Check your Box and Remove Your Shorts!

In my forty years an an electrician, I never had a service call like that one!

ramonbrookramonbrookalmost 7 years ago
Don't get me wrong I love the story but .....

Is chapter 2 a sequel to chapter 1?

In chapter 1 Tawny was VERY much friends with Mr Green and in chapter 2 she asks him all kinds of questions that imply they don't know each other!

Because of that the story was off for me! But I treated it like a standalone story!

ramonbrookramonbrookalmost 7 years ago
Okay ... after reviewing ....

I figured out that TAWNY is the only common character, NOT the older man!

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