All Comments on 'Taylor Pays for College'

Nice job and great story. I can think of several plot developments i'd enjoy.

1)remote control vibrator. Emily controls a vibrator in taylor in some pubic situation (soccer game, classroom, party, etc.).

2)Emily forces taylor to attend party or soccer game in skimpy/slutty outfit.

3)emily turns taylor into school slut (like a mascot). Maybe a fundraising party to buy taylor plastic surgery (fake tits, doll-esque face).

These storylines may be to specific and better suited for a story of my own, but I'd love to see you incorporate something along these lines.

Thank you.

I get that this is just a story I'm just saying, there are a surprising number of guys who will pay for tuition, and they aren't quite this fickle.

I love these kinds of stories, where the main character thinks she can stay in control, and it takes a long time for her to realize how deep she's gotten herself in. I really liked the image of Taylor having to sit on the floor and give foot massages, and how Emily was confused but happy to go with it. It will be interesting to see what happens now that Emily is in on it.

One of the best stories I've read in a while on this site, treads the line between reluctance/consent in a way that is both really sexy without getting too fucked up. Love it

What a great beginning. Sad that people get used when in need, especially young women. Well done but we need a closing.

I like that it's not a typical blackmail kind of story and that Emily actually isn't sure initially what to do about Taylor, those are good, unique elements to the story.

Really enjoyed this, good story with an original twist and sets up the series nicely.

Poor Taylor. I suppose she's brought it on herself (within the confines of her fictional world), but everyone she crosses paths with seems to be an asshat.

Not bad. Glad I looked in your thread and opened the link.

Very well done!

Looking forward to finishing the series.