by StoryTeller07
I normally like BDSM stories, and I adore tales of spanking and humiliation, and I know this is a fantasy but even as masturbatory fluff it makes no sense. Endangering someone's livelihood is not erotic. Leaving them caged outside at night is potentially deadly. What if a predator arrived, like a vicious dog? Tied and alone all day, same stupidity at work here, it can be deadly and is turn-off. What if a fire breaks out? The girl is a jerk, and the teacher a fool. This story pissed me off. Erotica should turn you on. One star is too high..
Over the top...and off a cliff.
The best fantasy keeps some resemblance to reality.
Very imaginative. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope for sexy clothing, humiliation and bondage in school.
I HAVE ABSOLUTELY HATED THE LAST TWO CHAPTERS OF THIS AND IF IT DOSENT GET BETTER ILL TELL THE WEBSITE THAT THIS STORY OF YOURS NEEDS TO BE TAKEN OFF THE WEBSITE AND THAT THEY NEED TO WATCH THE STORIES YOU ADD FROM NOW ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It seems the dog cage was originally INSIDE and then they went outside to potty and suddenly it was there. There were other consistency errors too, careful proofreading catches these. Worth the price of admission though, since it's free!!