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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Dude, repetition equals boredom

"taking proper care of her" repeated once

"fine style" repeated once. Writers seem to think it's a cool phrase. It isn't.

By the way, "getting between 'too' girls"? - Seriously?

Editor needed urgently.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
who's in charge?

I'm not sure why, but in the beginnening, I though the principal was female. It wasn't until about 1/4th of the way through that his sexual persuasion became clear to me. Otherwise, a good story.

YOMEYO

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