by Ashson
"taking proper care of her" repeated once
"fine style" repeated once. Writers seem to think it's a cool phrase. It isn't.
By the way, "getting between 'too' girls"? - Seriously?
Editor needed urgently.
I'm not sure why, but in the beginnening, I though the principal was female. It wasn't until about 1/4th of the way through that his sexual persuasion became clear to me. Otherwise, a good story.
YOMEYO