by CiaoSteve
Thanks for reading. I would love to know what you think. It's difficult to fit a whole story into 750 words, but I hope I have left a sense of the scene. Sometimes I think of these flash tales as a sounding board to the full tale. If I wrote it, would you want to read?
Holy cow. I would love to see where you would take this. Whet my appetite and then leave me dangling on the edge of the bed! Good job with the 750 words.
Loved this and yes I’d definitely love to read more.
Thanks for sharing, Tess (uk)