All Comments on 'Teaching the Cub Ch. 05 - Date Pt. 01'

I wish the chapters would be longer, with a bit more description. I hate to see his girl friend having sex with another man, i guess i am old fashioned. I wouldnt mind them having other women. Please keep up your excellent work. I thoroughly enjoy this story.

Thanks for the feedback. I would make them longer, but I tend to get bored with my own story when I let a chapter get too long. And when I get bored with my own story, I actually start to summarize more and give less description. As far as the little bit of description I do, I honestly write like I enjoy to read. I typically like when an author gives me freedom to fill in details on my own. But, to each their own. As far as the other man goes, unless I'm writing a story from the female perspective, which I've only done once, then the only man that exists is the narrator. Kind of a last man on earth perspective. I don't like other men in my fantasies, so, you don't have to worry about me adding a male character like that. And there will most definitely be other women. Thanks for the encouragement.