All Comments on 'Technically We're Estranged Ch. 01'

Awesome start

Very interesting start.

a very good tease. think this is going to be interesting.......Looking forward to the next bite of the story.Yes bite not bit. GP

good tease I look forward to your next installment

I never expected to read porn structured as a legal document !!!! Keep it up! (that goes to your other works too )

Fantastic writing and a sexy scenario. Thanks for posting!

So... What do I say? On the one hand, I find the whole webcam thing distasteful, and the antithesis of sexually titillating. I even try not to look at the Lit “VIP Cams” ads because they destroy the mood.

On the other hand, you write really well.

I ended up giving you four stars for the writing, taking away one for what you wrote about!

I would bed Bella!!!

yeah, this series does nothing for most of us... no real sex involved here, just rhetoric talking about wanting sex...... moving on.....

The random anonymous comment 7 years later is *chefs kiss*. Who is 'most of us'?

Gotta love it.

I just found this author and have enjoyed chapter one. Nice, easy to read writing style. We get to know the characters personalities, which is great. On to chapter two!

Great start, lm reading more

5/5

Cute start. Typo on 2nd page - text reads ". . . early to be and early to rise. . ." when it should read "early to bed".