All Comments on 'Technically We're Estranged Ch. 02'

I enjoyed every second of your story. I would love to have some more background information about the characters. I also think you could some very interesting places with Bella, even if they never get together. (Though I would like it if they did.) One option that I think would be a fun and "Twisted" twist would be having her watch the cousin with him. (With not knowing about the fact that she's his cousin.)

Hope that helps.

Minor details like cam chat whispers, I like how you let us read through the story for the background info! (Fellow commenteer, criminal lawyers never reveal just allow you to form the mental pictures they wish from what they say. In some religious circles this can be considered a form of lie...still only by omission)

Good story please continue!

This series is great! I love the incest aspect as well as the flirty secretary. Your work is amazing and I hope you continue with this series and the FoF series as well!!

Great story. The quality of writing is much better than most authors on here and the concept of the story is awesome and different. Please continue this storyline.

Your story is both well paced and developed. Basic info provided as we go along with

hints to underlining feelings. No matter, within reason, which way you go you have the making of a great story. Liked how you told but hinted with the username...OverCs.. With the multiple usernames playing with just ome thing....how many other things can be played with? Keep going! GP

I have stay say that I am totally hooked by howyou have the story progressing. The teasing is hot. And it makes you keep reading to see how much each character can handlle. Keep up the great work.

I normally don't comment but wow that hit the spot. Love the cam chat and the other social media .. I hope there's more coming soon.

I can't wait until the next chapter. I like the pace it is going at. Can't wait to see where this adventure goes

Original, real (mostly), and damn hot, can't wait to see where this goes!

But really looking forward to them hooking up for real!

I'm thoroughly excited to see what happens next. Again this story is really hot!! Thanks for posting

I approve this story and will be following it.

still no more on the story. GIVE us more of these two.

as of 7/25/15 he has twe 3 in editing process 4 in its que and 5 is about to be written... now that i have that out of the way... great story i cant wait to read the next one... actually i can but im still eager to see where the story goes

With clients like his it would not be good to get him angry.

5 stars, and thanks for making me laugh every time that guy requests "feet?"

I haven't read any other sex stories like this one that I can remember, but I've really liked your other stuff so I figured I'd give it a try.

Just love the story and all the details. Also love Bella, hope the three are having a threesome at some point. Keep it up!

just nice man, you good

I'm loving this series so far. Love your writing style!

Pls. tell me about your recent writing and add me to your list 4 updates.

I thought you did a good job of weaving social media into story. I'm looking forward to reading the other TWE chapters. Thanks for writing for us to enjoy!

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I for one love the "teasing, drawn out aspect".

I can't decide where I want this to go. Part of me wants Mel to have figured it out and already know exactly who he is; another part wants her to not have a clue. Either way, I'm sure your story will continue to be awesome!

I like how these are are short, and to the point. I also LOVE the idea of stumbling across a family member on a porn site by sheer accident. Great story!

Hmmm, TWE1 was pretty good, but#2 was way hot!! Major serious stroke fest. Glad to see that Bella is lending a hand here. Want to see her put a physical hand here, with Mel watching. Or Stephan and Bella both masturbating watching Mel. Oh the possibilities. It's hard typing one handed on a tablet. 😅

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Very very HOT!!!! So the story mainly continues with the teasing. But have a heart for poor Stephan, especially with a hot female like Bella around him, flirting with him, knowing his activities with his phone and computer. Since both are consenting adults, what stops Stephan from going all the way with Bella? If he's not interested in commitment, he can make it clear to Bella and if she's OK with it, they can have a good time as long as it lasts.