All Comments on 'Teddy Bare Pt. 01'

It was a very nice read; I enjoyed it. Not to be an ass hat but your math doesn't add up (I was a math major so I'm kind of anal about it). Two hours at 10 plus 8 hours at hours of 15.............. I know, ass hat, but I can't help myself.

At least I can excuse my lack of mathematical prowess - I have dyscalculia, and sometimes it catches me out!

Luv to the story line... thought as his mother introduced him .. n knew he was doing nude ... she may have joined them later as model n for fun ... as a female reader would have been erotic

You captured the wonder, passion and enjoyment so well!!!!! I look forward to Ch. 02!

Wonderfully written story - every young man's fantasy.

Thank you

Thoroughly enjoyed this story; erotic yet sweet, not too rushed and felt very realistic. (By which I mean, it didn't seem contrived as so many stories of this ilk can do.)

Looking forward to the next instalment.

Very well written with the exception of Teddy's habit of starting nearly every verbal exchange with "er". After the fourth time it just became annoying. The storyline, though, was every young man's dream: being seduced by an experienced woman.

As always, Rat, good story! You captured the excitement of a younger guy with an older woman very well. Looking forward to Part 2. RTR!

Every man's dream - well, mine at least.

Great writing

Great story and a fantasy any young man would love to live

I accidentally hit a 1 instead of a 5 and feel bad about it. This story is Just excellent!

I love this story - I really think it's one of the best clothed female, naked male stories out there, and one of your best. Perfectly paced, naughty enough to be erotic without devolving into gratuitous dirtiness, "taboo" but with just enough class, humor, humanity, and above all, sensuality. Fluently vivid enough to feel "real." Hardly a note out of place.

I really do hope you write more in this series! I've read this one several times and will be sure to revisit. Can't wait for Part 2. Thanks!

Really enjoyed this apart from your annoying habit of using biology textbook parts descriptors. ( Meatus etc ) Comes over as very clinical to me.

A really wonderful read. The feelings and descriptions took you into the artists studio, and bedroom.

Thankyou for a lovely read.

Nick

Loved the story. All of it. Well written, good pace and loved the humorous booby traps. The Barnes Wallis analogy had me chuckling with teenage embarrassment.