by Momstheboss
I remember always wanting to fuck my step mom when I was in late teens after she caught me jacking off. Fast-forward a dozen years, after their divorce. She invited me to stay one weekend and ended up crawling into bed with me. She confessed that she still carried that image of me jacking my big cock and how aroused that made her. We had the best sex that weekend!
Tension, dialogue that was credible yet crackled , characters were same but just a bit different in terms of stereotypes that Mtb utilizes. The build up to and actual sexual scene was money.I liked how Ted was sorely tempted but backed off f---ing drunk stepmom. The father was an amiable enigma who isn't confined to one woman 👩 yet doesn't mind sharing wife with son, who he seems to see as extension of himself.
Bottom line(s): I really enjoyed plethora of quirky character nuances that served up as garnish/appetizer as well as culminating carnal showdown . Is this Momstheboss best effort yet ? It could well be although he has a lot of literary rough diamonds to his credit where initial outrage transitions to arousal.
Ergo the obvious score
Full marks *****
You could not keep the names straight on the first page. Can't enjoy it through the errors.
You couldn't keep the names straight. Terrible story. A good writer could have done much better with the idea.
You don't have the talent for writing.
This story was great. Had enough tension dialogue and build up that i didnt even notice your mistakes. You have a great talent! Would love to see more 'love hate' fucking scenarios in the next chapter with her eventually fully embracing him
Ted became John; story is littered with spelling and grammar errors making it difficault to follow.