All Comments on 'Teen Turns: Hot Tub Seduction'

I do not like being critical, but this seemed fragmented and not well put together... Measuring against your other stories, it doesn't do well... Sorry...

I agree it was too short. What was written was great but you should added the nightcap as well were Miranda figured out she was at least bi if not full on lesbian.

Looking forward to your next chapter. Loved the ending.

I've read a lot of your stories, and while this is by no means bad, I just don't feel that it's your best piece of work.

It was good. No complaints from me.

Just how long of a night was it going to be? How long of a week was it going to be or whatever? Why didn't the other cheerleaders come to the party? Had they been to Tiffany's partys before been seduced by mom? This is at least worth a few more chapters. I loved the premise of the story it just doesn't go far enough. I would not think that Tiffany and the other girl would not be dumb enough to not know what was going on in the hot tub plus grandma on the phone had to know something was going on. So does Miranda go to Mrs. Steele's bed later that night? I certainly hope so. I give it a 5 not necessarily for this chapter but for the one s.

Loved the seduction scene and want more

it didn't surprise me where this one ended. Also hoping for more chapters in this story line! Once again you have opened some unanswered doors that will hopefully expanded upon. Like Janelle is submissive to Tiffany (sounded like it)? Janelle's mother is obviously submissive to Rachel. I would like to see a back story on those 2 relationships, that would include Rachel and Tiffany tag teaming the submissive Janelle and her mother, and doing it in a way that is a surprise to Janelle's mother (just for shock value). Good way for Janelle's mother to find out she has so much in common with her daughter. Just my mind running in different directions. Great work as far as I am concerned!

I am not a big fan of your stories, I think they are just wrong, I know these are made up stories, but this one is a little better then the rest of your stories, but just as I said before just because a girl has sex with another girl does not mean she has turned her, but at least this one was a little better

I really like the shameless nature of Rachel. I'd really like to read a sequel with a strap-on.

You are amazing and have a great talent. Never stop writing please!

Excellent! Stories like this are hot as fuck.

I love your lesbian seduction stories! Older "mom' lesbian with teen is so hot. You are my favorite writer on Literotica.

My pussy is so hot after reading this story. I want to be dominated.

Kisses,

Liz

This was a very sexy story very sensual!

I love 99% of your stories, and this one has winner all over it, yes I could see some of this story unwinding, and still loved it. thanks again, and please keep writing.

Absolutely love the stories you write involving "turning" a straight woman. This is right up there with the best of them. Keep up the awesome work!

definitely need to continue this series pls

I want this story to go on forever...

You really have a way with the Ladies. I'm taking notes, I wonder about the tapping. Mostly they don't like their clit treated like a cock, they just are so responsive. Its/I'm/Its hard to hold back. *~*,

The use of the term. " mommy". Very hot...and not in an incestrial way...it notes gentle sensual domination....

gosh....where can i find a mommy like that?

This story was amazing. I haven't come as many times reading others. Maybe it's because my name IS Miranda...

Please let there be more from these two!

Great! Hope there's more to come.

I don't know how this got such high ratings, but this is actually laughably bad.

the premise of a mommy with a cheerleader is very hot......but develop the characters more fully....in the hot tub and without much character interaction suddenly mommy reaches over and slides her hand up the leg.....that is not believable....

This is one story that I regularly come back to again and again. I dream about being Miranda in the hot tub with Ms. Rachel, being seduced by her, and eventually becoming her pet. It speaks so directly to what I would love to have happen in my own life. An excellent, wonderful story that speaks so directly to me. Thank you so much for writing it!

This is one of the best stories I have ever read; made me so hard and horny I had to beat off while reading it. Would love to have been able to watch this kind of action again. Once I did get to watch two girls/women and it was fantastic to see.

Wow, this was one of the most erotic short stories I've read on this site so far! thank you for sharing it with us!

I think a bit more 'hints' and less blunt chat would have been more seductive, but all and all pretty hot. But most of all, you should have pt. 2. "hot tub ..after they fall asleep" lol

And seems pretty clear, "something' is going to happen that night between her 2 friends..

I've read this story at least 50 times. I would love to see what happens in the future :)

What about all the stuff in her room that we were promised? The other teen turns was cuz way too short as well.

The "fairy cum mother" (LOL) turned Miranda's pussy into a cunt. ;-)

Love to read more

I don’t know where to start

Just this is great with so many possibilities of where it could lead

I want to see how she warms up to her friends when they come back.

I really liked this. The dominant mother was done with humour and not a little passion rather than the stereotypical cruelty that many of this type of story uses as a device. Miranda's seduction matched her personality: the girlfriend who travelled in the wake of her more experienced buddies. Now she's been awakened to the possibilities, I could see the storyline building around her being tutored to be submissive; recruiting other girls for Rachel. But then, would it spoil it to have a sequel?

A little finesse never hurt a good story, and there is very little in this one.

I read both Teen Turns:... stories in a row by date. I found your earlier story much better because I find the descriptions far superior. Taste and smell made that story hit me hard while this one left me with less. Good story though.

Wow

So hot, I was really waiting for the girls to show up and join the fun. A foursome in the hot tub would have been great.

Silkstockingslover, I always liked your stories, but this is superb. Would love it more in a screen play format and see it as play or video.

Part three is Tiffany's intro strap-on sex in all holes.

This was so hot. Really want a part 2!

OMG... that was Intense!!!!!!

Really liked it......flowed nicely. A.

You titled it like it was the next part to teen turns boyfriends mom but it's not you should have come up with a different title so it's not confusing to your readers

539. Have to repeat my previous comment that I just love your girl/girl sex especially when one is rather young and inexperienced. As a guy I can only imagine how good it must feel and the desire to cum again quickly. You make it so hot. I’ll bet you rub yourself off more than once as you write these tales of sin.

That 1 wasn't near as bad though you still used submissive and slut in the context a couple times but far less than normal instead of 2 stars ill give it 3 but only cause you still did use them which while it didn't completely kill the mood it still hurt the mood which hurt the story

Yep i was right Miranda turned out to be brain dead

sexy but be sexy if daughter joined in