All Comments on 'Temporary Girlfriend Ch. 05'

That was a great ending for this story. I would love for you to keep going with these characters and develop different story lines between them. I love the style of your writing and the way you describe the Sex scenes.

.....To Temporary Girlfriend, please continue with the engagement & weding.

Please continue with this story line, it has so much potential to just keep going and going and going.

There is so much more to be written about these characters. Their love for each other, the fantasies they each have, and their desires to include other lovers. You are the best author in Literotica.

You are absolutely one of the most talented writers on lit. I absolutely love your stories and look forward to reading all.

The temporary girlfriend series don't have to stop for as far as I'm concerned. Please do write about the wedding, the honeymoon in the Caribbean and perhaps further in their lives

The beginning of chapter 5 is the best erotic scene I have ever read -- bar none! Keep these stories coming!!

tender sensual and so so hot..the detail is just right and so well constructed..now that I have found you as a writer I will read all your stories.

I love stories that combine the philosophy of relationships with the passionate sex parts. I see it in Nick Scipio's stories and you have it too. Thanks for being a writer.

Kind of expected but nicely blended in.

Great read!

Thx!

It has already been said , but I must repeat, You are one of the most talented writers I have ever read. This as with you other stories was excellent . I feel truly blessed being privileged to be able to partake in you talent .

Thanks seems so inadequacy.

Tx Cracker

1 Star bad .

Wonderful way to end a story and start another journey. Hot ! Hot ! Hot !

Late comer here, but thoroughly enjoyed every word from start to finish. Great ending!

Great writing. Thank you..! More please.

Great story!

Loved the ending, and the relationship