All Comments on 'Tempted by Tanlines'

A good build up and a fantastic ending.

Five stars.

Thanks for the read

LOUSY ENDING.............

..........Ending sucked absolutely. Damn!!

The story has a nice flow. The suspense keeps me interested and reading

at the end you should of just said " Then we fucked " that's how blank it was. 2/5

Couldn't figure out how to end it or just lost interest?

Holy cow..what a great slow burn story....but then suddenly they're fucking and sharing a bed! What the?......

You have a talent, but don't let anything make you rush the ending. It ruined the entire thing.

GA is a prolific contributor, with a very decent list of Favorites. My wild guess is that he doesn't get paid for his contributions to Lit. This is a typically fine story, and the ending's perfectly okay. I like how this kid thinks. Lots and lots of boys at one time or another toy with the idea of revisiting that hairy hole between their mother's legs, now with the big fat cock they've grown between their own. Sean provides the answer. "Then I look at her near flawless body and think, why not? Why the hell shouldn't I do it?" It's as simple as that. The idea that a boy's penis should never ever absolutely not what are you crazy get stuffed up the same vagina he came out of is just a dumbs long-outdated taboo. It's just a bunch of stupid words. And that's supposed to stop a son and his mom from enjoying the by far best kind of fucking there is, motherfucking? What horseshit. Nothing can ever feel as good to a boy's cock as his own mother's cunt. And nothing can make a mother melt like having her own darling baby boy's stiff young cock way up inside her, touching the same womb he was conceived in and where he lived for nine months. Listen to Sean's mommy. "Oh my God," she squeaks, knees by her ears, her cunt taking all of me down to my balls. "My son ... Oh God ... Oh, Sean!" Thanks to Mr. A for bringing this liberated couple together and telling us all about it.

nice needs more chapters

Too may lit stories go on and on, forever. There's a reason an ejaculation is called a climax. I need no more words from Geronimo to tell me how this continues.

Donald

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IT was a bit quick at the end but still a great read

This story screams for a sequel. Thanks

The sight of mom nude leaves a lasting impression. It is a great thrill having son jo for mom.

Took a bit long and was quick at the end, but the suspense kept me reading. Good job

horny son breeds his mom

I love the idea

I think its a great HOT story !! Now that Sean and his Mom have crossed the line, they should get her on the pill and do what they both haven't been able to tell each other straight out. Have a sexual relationship and that they both trust each other and will be happy. It would be so HOT. Thanks !

...but here is the edited version sent by Anonymous:

SUPERB, 5 STARS & THEN SOME (*****++)

06/24/15 By: Anonymous

The story has 3 pages but all 3 contain necessay ingedoents in the buildup. The author skillfully bring the 2 characters to a perfect storm situation where the very improbable become the order of the day!

Some comments stated that the ending was too short & the story somehow got rushed. THE ENDING IS PERFECT.

The story reminded me how intensely & passionately i still lusted after my mom when i was 24 & she was 50.

To geronimo_appleby: thank you!

Really hot. Wish that was my mom.

Bit of a rush to the end which was a shame but otherwise hot and well written.

You took the "son can't resist after seeing mom naked" trope and made it fresh and interesting with Sean's tortured inner monologue. I think the end was perfect - the real climax of the story was when she started posing for him and talking about getting her tan lines back, since that's when she surrendered to her attraction. Everything after that is just the natural consequences of that moment. This may be my favorite of your many stories.

Great build up and just a great story.

Took way too long to start fucking her. The son knew his Mom well enough to know that she would have accepted him fucking her at Christmas when he was first turned on by her. Any slut that would parade around the house naked would be an easy fuck. If he's that dumb he shouldn't be allowed to enjoy pussy ever!!!

normal people resist such urges. Your story is great because it shows this and shows the struggle against an unnatural, or completely natural depending on your perspective, lust.

I totally agree with you that this is a great story.

Yes, the reluctance adds more eroticism than the acts of the 2 characters. Most likely each of them had an incestuous side all along but it was latent. The incestuous side wakes up and takes charge!

Also i agree that what is natural & what is unnatural depends on one's point of view.

WHERE I DISAGREE IS THAT MOM-SON INCEST IS ONLY LUST. I FIRMLY BELIEVE THAT IT IS BOTH LUST AND LOVE!

Dear geronimo_appleby, this submission is brilliant.

This is one weak ass story!!

great story something I'd love to do.keepthe stories coming

His mom is a keeper.

Especially if she has bikini tan lines, they highlight and draw your eyes to those areas that aren't normally seen. I see my mom in two different ways. When she's fully dressed during the day, she's my mom. When she comes home and gets naked, she's a hot body with a pussy I want to put my cock inside of. I've got sexual urges flowing all day when I'm awake, and at night most of the time too. I wear shorts because my mom has such a great body I need to cover my almost constant erection. She was only fifteen when she had me. At thirty three, should could easily have been ten years younger. Her tan lines almost made it seem like she had a spotlight on her private areas, I can't help drool when she's busy doing something, and not paying any attention to me. Her tits are perfect to me, in fact I judge every pair of breasts I see to hers, because they are so perfect, I've never seen any better! They are so round, and firm, like big oranges. Her areolas are round like half dollars, with nipples that stick out over a half inch. I just want to suck on them like a baby sucking his bottle. Her tight tan lined ass, and her trimmed pubic triangle in front, it almost looks like it's directing you to her sacred spot. I knew she was horny a lot, because I could often notice the inside of her thighs glistening with her juices. How could she not expect me to be turned on? She had to have caught glimpses of me from time, to time, shifting my direction of sight from her body? Was there something about it being forbidden, that turned us both on so much? Oh, how I wanted to be ramming my cock into her pussy! To see those tits bouncing, to hear her moaning the was she does when she's having an orgasm. Here I am in the same room with a beautiful naked body, almost asking to be fucked! I was so horny, I'd masturbate at least a half dozen times a day. I couldn't help but think of her body, especially her perfect tits when I spanked one out, It never did take me very long to bust a nut the first time, or two, but I never went completely soft, I was always semi-erect, half my normal length of nearly eight inches. In succession though, I could be ready to go again within minutes, and each time I would last longer than the time before. By the fifth or six time, I was hard as a rock and good to go for about forty five minutes, maybe even an hour. I loved my mom, but I loved her body too. It wasn't fair! I wanted to do her in multiple positions, until she had over a dozen orgasms. Mom wasn't a stranger to alcohol, by any means, and she didn't care if I drank with her, as long as I stayed at home and didn't pass out on a regular basis. On night we were watching the old Emmanuelle movie from the seventies, and I made up a huge pitcher of Long Island Iced Tea. After about half the pitcher was gone, so were we! Half way though the movie we were both very turned on. Her nipples stuck out so proudly, they all by hypnotized me in my stupor. The bulge in my shorts was visible, there was no way it couldn't be. She got up and went to the bathroom, I quickly went over to smell the cushion were she was sitting. It smelled heavenly, and damp from her juices. After several minutes I heard several loud moans from the bathroom, and I knew what my mom was doing. I couldn't help but stroke my cock through my shorts to her sounds as I continued to watch the erotic movie. She came back looking flushed and sat down. I had to keep my hands on my lap to hide the top two inches of my cock that had popped out of my shorts, and nothing I could do about at the moment. At that point, the movie was at the part where they were in a plane, in the bathroom having sex. We both looked at each other with lustful eyes. I removed my hands from over my waist revealing my partial top hardness to my mom. Then I jumped up, moved to my mom, and put my mouth to her pussy lips, preparing my tongue to enter her forbidden depths.

Well up to your standards.

REgards

The author brilliantly depicts the inner world of a young man as he lusts after his mother.

I recognized myself in the story - except that my day dreams (& yes! wet dreams, too) never came true!

I read the story twice.

It is multi layered.

Mom has boyfriends not because any of them are the love of her life, but BECAUSE her libido is strong.

Mom dumps her boyfriend because he was an asshole. The breakup leaves her "all shook up".

Son does not like her boyfriend. Is the boyfriend an asshole, a jerk or something, or the son, totally subconsciously, wants the mom for himself? If the latter is the case, the son is not aware that he has a latent Oedipal side hidden in the deepest layers of his psyche. His mom's tan lines had a deep impact on him, & his Oedipal side woke up & set itself free.

This is a sex story and a love story two-in-one.

Both mom & son had to lose tons of inhibitions before they could MAKE LOVE. That part was very well depicted in this story.

The build up was done masterfully, step by step. We the readers can clearly sense the erotic tension is growing.

As to the ending, i think it is exactly the way it should be. The author is INTENTIONALLY letting us use our imagination.

Last but not least, each of the 3 pages can be used as jack-off material.

Hi everybody:

If you are into mom-son sex stories, this one is a must read!

I think this touches on all the emotions, guilt, reluctance, and tensions in a realistic manner. They each have their own a ha moment. They each become aware of the other. Dramatic.

I am glad i came across this story.

My first time reading this one. Great buildup to a crashing climax . Loved the ending!

Soooooo Hot!

Imaginatively conceived and brilliantly crafted. A tour de force. I gave you a

5.0 = 💯% (💜💙💚💛❤) 👍👍!

This is an EXCELLENT mom-&-son incest/taboo

As on Feb 16 2021 this story had got 217.1k views including 188 'faves', which is 0.86 'faves' per 1k views, an excellent fave-per-views ratio! In my book, stories that get more than 500 faves per 1k views deserve an A in popularity!

i've been working my way through the alphabet from Z to A reading your mother/son stories i gotta say- you do have a way of frothing things up...BIGLY! i have quite a few more to go and i'm sure i'll enjoy them all. What i especially like is their fairly short length- it's a turn-off to get to the end of the first page to see i have 30 more pages to wade through, with all its mind-numbing repetitiveness. i also love that you're unafraid to show off your vocabulary and have very few typos and and nonexistent grammar flaws. PLUS: in these few pages, you sure know how to light me up with the sex and all it's ramifications. Great stuff! And thanks!