by Cruel2BKind
what a lovely sweet story, ur character development is fabulous...u make me want to root these two sweet men on...cant wait for next chapter it's a great love story!
Why dont the guys I date behave like this! Must be true, all the good ones are either married or gay!
I've enjoyed all of your stories but you have now moved up into the favorites category! You talked about FIREFLY, it's my favorite show - EVER! LOL
Looking forward to the next chapter!
I just absolutely loved Ms. Delesseps and she (you) were absolutely right. That made the chapter for me.
Sweet, sweet chapter.
~M
Love the romance. Hmm, I've never watched Firefly, but I love Joss Whedon (was so mad when Dollhouse got cancelled). I might just have to go check out Firefly now.
I just think it's funny how I can write a chapter of a story without any sex in it and still get high votes because I mention my favorite show!
Firefly was a great show, a pity though with what happened to it. Its not just the show though. You got good ratings for a good chapter, thats all
Lots of great and even funny details in this chapter. And I completely agree with nomoretears: Ms. Delesseps was priceless.
The whole Bryce thing was strange at first, but now that I've read the whole story and know the reason, it's kind of heart breaking - even though it's described in a quite humorous way.
the thing of the alien-clock is so so funny! it always happens to me! damn time goes so slow when you really want something nice will happen... this pair is so tender (well the story's name is clear), and to me there are nothing like tenderness to melt my heart.
I keep reading it; so there will be more comments. I just want to thank and congratulate you.