All Comments on 'Terribly Silly Incest Ch. 02'

56fff tits does she have a forklift to help her walk?6 in dick would put it thru her diaphram you know the part of the body that helps you breath.pussy juice 6in deep on the floor?it would take 5 people pissing in a bath tub to get that much fluid in 1 spot much less in the living room floor. really why do writers make such fucked up numbers?most of us prefer a little bit of yea that could happen unless we are reading sci-fi stories

"Mom was a lot older than us, she was nearly twenty-seven."

I don't know what's funnier, the story or how many people don't get it.

This is just getting funnier by the chapter, keep up the good work.

Oh my this story keeps getting funnier and funnier. To those complaining about unrealistic numbers look at the title and the preface for chapter 1

Getting a bit TOO silly for me. Might turn me off to sex entirely, even good sib sex.

I can't wait until Daddy gets home! He will make Jack suck his 32 inch cock!

You missed one important thing, he said his mother was 27, hmmm lets see everyone must be 18 or older, so that means mom had the kids when she was

9? Oh dear!......now that's silly!

It is off the wall, but it is literotica! But then hey werewolves and trips to the stars, and vampires are not silly. Right! Not!

All you really did was take a basic incest story and made random changes to measurements (e.g., cock and breast sized, ages, the amount of cum). It’s a one joke story, and the joke was apparent after a few paragraphs. After that, it’s just repetitive, and that’s not satire, it’s sad.

i dont see a preface for ch1 it goes straight into the story

You kept their names the same throughout both chapters...

"Sometimes when Mom and I were out together people would mistake her for my daughter" completely cracked me up.

Sixteen inch penis, that isn't silly it's just down right pathetic attempts at trying to write something to entertain people

Tits that are FFF's and a 16" dick!! That is to much and not at all enjoyable to read.

You morons have not read his other stuff obviously ..... Xarth writes excellent stories, and for once decided to just be silly. Nothing the matter with that, unless you are an idiot troll just looking to nit pick and judge others work. I look forward to your next wonderful submission as always Xarth.

"She was nearly twenty-seven. She looked a lot younger than that though, even younger than Julie.Sometimes when Mom and I were out together people would mistake her for my daughter."

This is gold.

I don't know whether this is supposed to be a satire or a parody, or maybe even a pastiche, but it doesn't work as any of them; like a 15 yr-old boy wearing an aftershave called "Rampant!" it just tries too hard, and consequently doesn't hit the mark in any of them. Xarth writes sublime, unforgettable, life-affirming stuff, this is one couplet he should quietly delete and think of as a momentary aberration.

Have I missed something? Wasn't the brother's name Justin in chapter one?

Ok, funny, but no more, ok?

Most hilarious thing I've ever read, I think. To those of you who have no sense of humor, feel free to tune in to C-Span and give us a full report tomorrow. Xarth is just having fun and is generous enough to share with us. I, and my 16 inch cock, appreciate it. Please keep being terribly silly and I will keep terribly reading. Rock on, Dude!

max052

If the Zucker Brothers wrote erotic literature, this is the sort they would write. 6" of cum in the living room? Why not?

From 24" down to 16", I can only guess that he had a jealous mohel.

Did the mom have these kids at age 9 or what? The previous chapter said they are age 18 and the mom is 27? This series just got more sketchy.

I CAN NOT GO THROUGH THE OTHER CHAPTERS.

THERE IS NO CLEAR THINKING AND KEEP THINGS STRAIGHT! BACK TO THE DRAWING BOARD AND START OVER

A sixteen inch pecker? Get real!

How old was the mom when she had these kids? Ten?

This is one of the dumbest stories I have ever read.

If nothing else make the next one at least semi-real.

This one is terrible! Yuck!

It's fucking "terribly silly" on purpose, he's making fun of inconsistent and unrealistic shit that's on here.

Damn y'all are funny a middle schooler could identify this as a joke

He'll of a spoof....

.... and I'm loving it !

I just hope the other four chapters live up to the same level of silliness as the first two.

A spoof story of the first degree, very clever - well done !

Great comment max052, I agree with every word you wrote.

Great stuff Xarth, can’t wait to pull up chapter 3.

The story is actually pretty good IF you would start being realistic with cock size and now moms bust size. Get real please!!!

The story IS titled "Terribly Silly Incest"

I know you're saying terribly silly, but just look closely at bra sizes for a moment. You'll notice there's a number, and then letter(s). They mean different things. Spend 3 seconds researching it, and you'll see why a 56FFF woman is a huge SSBBW with somewhat big tits but mainly due to her being enormously overweight.

hot as fuck. make tits and cock even larger....bro/son is 2 feet long and mom is a 38Z-28-36 -40

Mom must not be that hot. His cock shrank by 8 inches and never grew any bigger!

It's meant to be silly! Lighten up!😂😂

🤣🤣🤣

I was wondering if his cock would keep lengthening by 2 inches every time it's mentioned. Figured if that kept up through all the chapters he'd have a 72" dick.

ROFLMAO!!! "but the love juices on the floor were almost six inches deep" 😆 🤣 😂

You're killing me, Smalls! You're killing me!

It's still too tedious to try and read it word for word. But just scanning through for the punch lines is still fun.

Good thing this is fiction. Knowing that Sunny Jim is 16, by rule, Mom can't be 27. Hyuk, Hyuk, Hyuk but, silly is good!

Can’t remember last time I laughed so hard!!!!!

FANTASTIC

I'm just grateful the fluids ended up submerging the first floor instead of this turning into cumflation.