by Boxlicker101
This isn't a piece of art, just an erotic story, nobody but you take it seriosly. I've found that I like more the stories that you disapproved.
After Terry told him that she wasn't bored because the crew showed her what sailors did, you missed it...this is where you might have added 'Honey, I don't like the way Holcombe does business and tried to get me to sign...I turned him and his entertainment down'!!!