by caprine
Your story was off to a bumpy start but as I read more I began to enjoy it.
I liked it from the start and just hope I remember I read about the Old West so that I won't miss the next Chapter. Thought it was right down cute the way it is written that she wants it - gets it and if'n you don't like then tuff sht. hehe,,,,women==known a few like that and I felt the same way about them.! Thanks. JAG/TSO
Thoroughly implausible on many levels, but a thoroughly amusing story, nonetheless. (Okay, the "Bar BQ ranch" and the lawyer "Mr.Tort" were a bit over the top. But overall, still cute.) Entertaining!
-- KK in Texas
So, I don't know if you are still here . But if you are this one's really good
Despite what you see from Hollywood, women before the 1920s did not dress in trousers/slacks and did not ride horses astride! The only time a woman would have worn trousers was IF they were trying to pass themselves off as a man, as some very few did during the war or as one or two did who rode as a drover. Just because you saw it in a movie does not make it historical!