All Comments on 'Tex and Tamara'

by NTsarina

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Dreamweaver594Dreamweaver594over 9 years ago
very nice!

What a wonderful beginning. It can go many directions from here, I just hope that you keep it positive and life affirming. There is hope for Tamara and Tex, I would like to see their relationship grow and strengthen. Perhaps it will, I hope that it does.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

She is transsexual not transvestite.....

Joscelyn2tgJoscelyn2tgover 9 years ago
I Have To Agree With Both Comments...

...She's transsexual but its a very interesting story and does a wonderful job explaining all of the various issues I ran into as a pre-op transsexual or transgender female out on a date and dealing with social issues that affected us. For me, I called it the "salad bomb" because I tried to always tell my date by the time the salad was served, and yes, its incredibly rare that I was EVER allowed to finish my meal pleasantly with us sharing the meal, me paying for my meal, him paying for his and just saying "gee, it just didn't turn out"... no, as soon as I mentioned that I had been male... and it took various forms, depending on whether or not they knew what a transgendered person was, or transsexual person... because then we eventually made it to the definition of those terms, dancing around them until it 'used to be a guy' was uttered, and then the evening would come to an end, and about half of the time angry words were also uttered, involving such lovely bigoted favs as "faggot" and "cock in a skirt" and other disgustingly moronic terms.

Still... it shows the real spirit of those girls that have weathered such attacks, because that's what they are. They are simply vocal attacks at that point, although they many times turned into a more physical form of attack and it was important to keep your distance from your dining companion... I wonder just how many genetic girls ever thought about keeping their distance from their dining companion in case they were attacked and punched or stabbed or in one case I was lucky enough to get the guy sent to jail for, attempted to set me on fire. Yep... going out to eat... its not just a date... its a life or death experience... but only if you used to be male. Lucky us. Well... at least I couldn't get pregnant when they pretended to be nice and raped me later. It kinda made the whole dining out with a guy fade into a perfect nightmare and I never went out again after the guy threw lighter fluid on me... I figured that was enough for me. Thanks for sharing this story, it was very educational and I'm sure it helped people get a much better idea what we girls went thru. Also appreciated you calling us women, girls, and ladies. We aren't "gurls, "shemales" or anything else unless we allow ourselves to be called such. Cheers! --- Josie

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
needs work but ok

Well coming from a strait guy I have a bit mum an a gay unkle so I can understand that plus been to a gay bar had many gays hit on me but I told them this you try anye I'll rip your througts ok if they try so they respected me on account on if there lives depends on it but I did hit it off as a friend to a ts she was not bad how my mum told me but since prison well she's all gay but I say since she had mids an eight of em two different father's though hey do you call that gay or bi dunno in my account but I like to read these to see the ending if it ends good or it deserves a moral saying of you fucked up sine you admitted that this is a Lil mess up I'll say this not bad but its crammed I can tell you that ok but not bad but on the ts bit I'm not into it but its good to have a friend on ur back no pun intended ok to let you know I'm more in to the risk of getting pregnate not getting caught and of all things haveing the child then tell the kid your dads your grandpa or ur older brother is actually your dad mostly the most thing I want is a Lil more into the sex an a Lil more meaningfull ay but not bad

albertaboyalbertaboyover 9 years ago

A good story, hope there is part two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nice...

Hope there's more

AceofSpiesAceofSpiesover 9 years ago
A new take, bravo!

This is a very clever and intriguing approach to the whole "boy meets transexual" theme. The idea of capturing duality on canvas is neat and I think you handled Tex's apprehensions well. I particularly like the way his interactions with Tamara eventually enabled him to portray something of the turmoil she had experienced.

Transwomen sometimes face very real dangers when dating and I thought you handled both Tamara's nervousness and Tex's reaction sympathetically. As Jocelyn2tg has already mentioned, there are good reasons for opening up very early and for doing so in a public place. I also liked how you described Tex's initial rejection of Tamara's cock, this had the ring of truth and is a refreshing change from the guys who just drop to their knees and instantly become cocklovers - like me ;)

I'm glad you put in the bit about not being able to find an editor as it helped me look past some stylistic shortcomings to see the rough diamond at the heart of this story. I think it's a shame you weren't able to get help you asked for as I think a decent editor could have helped you produce something truly stellar. I hope you won't mind if I pm you my thoughts on this.

Thank you for sharing.

teddybearclubteddybearclubover 9 years ago
Oh My

Quite the story. It got me wet. Well a little wetter than wet. Woof!!!!

bobscnjbobscnjover 9 years ago
Love This

What a wonderful story. Really caught the trepidation of the boy vs the cock! Hope there's a part two to see how the relationship progresses...maybe with Tamara's friends?

Would be lovely to see some of the illustrations Tex made too!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Sexy Tamara

I just wish that I could meet a "Tamara" and have hot raunchy sex both ways with her.

Great story and list more versions to it.

Cool !!

JoJoJuddJoJoJuddabout 9 years ago
I love the dialogue

Given rational, real characters, I believe this story portrays how things could play out. There are serious and important undertones, yet, I laughed and smiled the whole time reading. What a Joy. I would love to read more about Tex and Tamera. Oh, and put me down for seeing the artwork as well! Thanks.

bad1_bbad1_babout 8 years ago
Wow

Extremely well written story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

There must be thousands of exotic theme stories based on all forms sex with transvestites. Just hit ‘trans. /crossdressers’ in the upper left hand corner.

The ones that I like, usually give me a hard on before the second page. By the last page, I’ve blown my load at least one time! Hey! Those are some extremely skillful writers.

There’s always these guys who love transforming their self into Beautiful, horny women, usually with tits. The author typically describes them as ‘a woman trapped in a man’s body’, or guy with little self-esteem who finds out that become a hot chick makes him popular, confident, even desirable, as well as sexually powerful. then there’s, well there’s these straight men that, like most of us, don’t consider themselves (and nor are they written as), gay men, but they love fucking/ or getting fucked by those horny women who, don’t forget, have cocks.

However, In this piece, I see a guy who finds the idea of men disguising themselves as women; (and are passable) a kind of sacrilege. NTsarina even makes Tex a creative type, who still struggles with the social norms that defines his own heterosexuality. But Tamara is sexy as hell, and Tex wants her.

And As for Tamara? I wouldn’t describe her as gay; More a bi-sexual. She has had to become Tamara so that the hidden dominate personality of ‘Carlos’ could also emerge. Anyone who becomes her lover must also become passive to her. ‘Tex And Tamara’, skillfully deconstructs many of the labels that seem to exist so that we can all know shame and guilt about any non conventional sexual desires we might have.

It’s good to read a story like this on Literotica. You managed to loose the fantasy components that most transgender stories must include in their recipes, while telling me a more true to life story that was as erotic as any of those stories that have made me reach for the Vaseline and a towel! I believe you have written at least one other chapter. Keep writing. Your a great storyteller!

smoothed273smoothed273about 1 year ago

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