All Comments on 'Texting Ch. 02'

Great story, I can't wait to find out if it was Janet or Marilyn. Or both. Post the next chapter soon.

I understand that you're going for a slow burn, but if you don't stoke the fire and fan the flames on a regular basis, the heat dies off rapidly, and what should have been a toasty warm blaze, a sizzling combustion, or even a raging inferno gets too watered down and then quickly fizzles out to nothing more than wet, dead ashes, which will always leave your readers feeling cold.....

this series needs to continue and soon. I love the setup and story and love the fact that it could be either or could even be another friend of Janet's I doubt it but technically it could have been anyone the sister let in.

fantastic story, shame there has been no incest yet. Hope you will write some more and get to the main event soon.

Please tell me you are going to continue this series. It was very well written and HOT as Hell.

Two chapters that literally end in 'blue-balls' both times for the MC. The writing is pretty good and I kind of like the direction of the story but why are they separate chapters and why isn't there some kind of resolution? It's like you stopped halfway through a chapter each time the chapter ends. There's no payoff, no reward, no cliff-hanger and nothing exciting about the story.

Good stuff mate I like it even with the blue balls both times it’s good but next chapter he should get some or with another girl to make the girls jealous but he needs some release.

I agree with WretchedMonkey, this is another unfinished story way to short and no real pay off, cliff hanger, resolution, or anything. Good Idea again, but this one by far is the weakest one of yours I have read.

This isn’t over

His sister is a liar, twice over. 1st she promised to fix him up with her friend, instead She is all over the friend and leaving him out. Also she said she was going to sit on his face while she deleted the pictures, he handed her the phone, she deleted then ran off.

Then all the teasing afterwards; pussy picture, short skirts without panties, bare asses on truck seat, female wrestling match sans panties, lezzie makeout session in his truck, then one of them (or both) tie him up and cum on his face while literally teasing his dick... Then YOU'RE just as bad of a tease by not bringing the story (and the MC) to a climax

please continue.

story just pissed me off to no end. Just total Bullshit!!

This sucked. Should gave had a followup to resolve it for Jay. Both girls were btches

good start

please continue.

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SISTER IS A BITCH, SO IS HER FRIEND

Wow I am loving this story series I hope it continues can’t wait to read the next one