All Comments on 'Texting Turns to Sexting Ch. 02'

Certainly creative and hot. Consider reducing the use of Nanette's "Oh my god". It's not adding to the story and makes her seem like a one-trick pony.

Came across as repetitive because of too much "oh my god" from the woman. "I'm so repetitive, oh my god." "I don't have a good vocabulary oh my god." "I'm horny and don't know how to say it oh my god." Narrator can paraphrase instead of quoting her.