All Comments on 'TGI Chronicles Pt. 1 Ch. 06'

A really interesting question----why, if she dislikes the guy and he's a lousy fuck, WHY is she fucking him??

Is she paying for some indiscretion from an earlier time that Ken found out about? I say indiscretion cuz it may not be about fucking/sex.

It would seem, though, if she had some extenuating cirumstance that she would unload it. Maybe figuring there would be NO chance of reconciliation if he knew what it was?

Getting Beth to talk and tell her parents about what's happened may be the thing to break the dam open. Or maybe a counselor for her??

You feed it to us slowly, as you should. You build up each chapter to move us on, as you should. And you leave us hanging while we wait for the next chapter, as you should. Well done. Thank you. Ronnie W.

It seems I've gone from "rags to riches" as there seemed to be so little to read that kept my interest for most of the summer. This week I've been busy every day thanks, in part, to you.

I'm enjoying this a great deal!

Thanks,

cageytee

interesting story,this would make a good novel or tv mini series. next chapter please

interesting story,this would make a good novel or tv mini series. next chapter please

interesting story,this would make a good novel or tv mini series. next chapter please

Great story. My only comment is that the wife cound't understand what she did yet. I wonder if she will. Probably Tim is wasting his time trying to salve his marriage.

all we read about, hear about, from this guy is: i'm hurting like hell and i love beth like hell but i can't trush her at all and i can't make a decision worth shit --- that's all we hear throughout this long story.

i mean, when's he going to stop crying, stop telling us his "pain", and get on to making some tough decision, one way or another, like a real man or a real woman?

she decided to fuck around; got caught; confessed,,, what has this juvenile-like husband done so far other than crying, feeling pain, and telling us about it?

I think the most revealing information hasn't been spoken yet, and it all comes back to the question "WHY?". I don't know how Beth's going to reveal her secret, nor with whom. That counselor might be a safe choice, even Denny is a possibility, but telling her husband face to face why seems unlikely at best. Beth doesn't seem to have that much courage.

It's going to be a rough scene when she finally talks to her parents, but I can see the necessity if they're ever going to resume their relationship as a married couple.

O.K. you got my interest, actually from the first chapter

you've captured my interest and now I can't wait to find

out how it all ends. Well done and keep it coming.

I'm not sure I like where the ending of this chapter seems to be heading. It seems like he's starting to feel guilty, as though *his* reactions to her betrayal were too harsh. I have a disturbing feeling that this character is starting to wimp out.

I'm beginning to think that the only way the author could think of to sell reconcilliation was to beat us to death with the hum-drum details of their daily life. This chapter is written better, but still a lot of grammar issues and boring details. Tim shouldn't feel guilty, she is an awful human being.

The rest of us read this months ago. Where was you brain? Or is this your new pulpit. We know you hate reconciliation. We also know your an idot - - so what's your point.

the marriage ended right here...

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she lied to him in chpater 1 about what she was doing with Ken

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she lied to him at first how long the cheating had been going on... Not until he was screaming at her and threatening her with force did she admit to anything

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she didnt tell PHL and DENNY

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she didnt tell her parents

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she INENTIONALLY let them think the husband was an evil or abusive person

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from the story

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<i> Denny looked indignant, "You mean that Friday's confession was only because you made her?"

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"I'm sure she would have told you in her own good time. She needs you as a friend. She would have got round to it. I just motivated her." </i>

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huh? what the FUCK is that based on ? his wife stellar character!?!?!?!?

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You see its over. Even after she was caught all she wants to do is lie and manipulate HIS pain. Even now she STILL wont do what is decent and right.

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This is the 1 time in here life where BETH has to have a Gut check. ITS OVER

The ITP storyline is a bit long and seemingly inconsequential. 4 stars.

Dragged out and I'm done! There is NO end in sight.

MAYBE she doesn’t have to tell her parents EVERYTHING, just that she was in the wrong and Tim was right to throw her out.

As Tim said, if they DO reconcile, if her parents aren’t told the truth, what kind of an in-law relationship is he going to have?

As far as the written commitment goes, as long as she MAKES the commitment, and understands that he is not going to except any spinning from her in the future.

He sent the Email I believe on Monday night, Denny saw Beth Tuesday. Didn’t she get the Email? It SHOULD have made her feel SOMEWHAT better.

after six chapters it is dragging on. Us Americans like our rom coms to come in at about 2 hrs, not on and on with each little detail of the day.

Congrats. Continues to be a great story. Four out of five. What I really like is how important the rest of Tim's life is to this story. Some stories in this genre simply say "I went to work and couldn't think straight" or "I talked to my best friend but I hardly heard a word he said." and then it is back into the relationship stuff. By adding the detail at work and the interaction with friends it deepens and enriches the character. Having said that i wonder if the big promotion is this author's equivalent to the betrayed man finding a hot young thing on the side which is common in this genre of story. Since this is my first reading of this author I can't tell. But I am enjoying it. Also there were a few minor typos but nothing serious. Cheers Steve

Still love it.

Fuck me! I gave up on the other long winded repetitive bullshit 22 chapter story by this writer and this one isn't a whole lot better.

You are still in your pervert cuckold/wimp fantasy!! Your protagonist has no chance to act like a normal men would act!! He is trapped in your fantasy to be a wimp!! I think in one of your next chapters he isnt anymore the victim he is then the guilty ones!!!

There seems to be a number of rather unfair comments about the author's work, especially by someone posting on Feb 14th, a number of times.

This is much more than the rather obvious 'burn the bitch' stories, clearly loved by some. This is not about a man who is a 'wimp'. It is an exploration about the raw emotions, the mental conflicts, the agony and the difficult decisions around a marriage breakdown. The solution does not always have to be about violence and divorce.

The author takes time to develop both protagonists and plot. I appreciate that. Quite quickly I feel I know the characters, and can clearly see them as real people. The story engages the reader, and leaves them invested in what happens to the people involved.

This is much more than the cliche of husband comes home to find noises coming from the bedroom, finds wife in bed with lover, takes photos, storms off (but not before wrecking the lover's car), moves to a hotel, next morning empties bank accounts, sees lawyer to start divorce proceedings, follows lover and beats him to a pulp one dark night, ruins wife's career, meets a woman who is everything his wife was not, divorces, moves on and takes both satisfaction and the moral high ground that he was right, and his wife a lying slut.

Well done on this story. Ignore your detractors who damn you in a single sentence or two, and keep the stories coming.

Why must some commenters insist on calling a writer derogatory names like 'wimp', 'cuckold', etc. "You cannot make yourself taller by standing on somebody else's shoulders." Meaning, you make a fool of yourself by verbally abusing the writer. I may find fault with his grammar, spelling, or punctuation, but threatening a writer or slinging profanity at the writer is by no means acceptable. I have been wanting to express that for many months, if not years.

real life, I think I'd support a reconciliation, not because it would be the right and moral thing to do, but rather because Tim is such a ninny he deserves her, and it would prevent some other unfortunate man from being victimized by Beth.

The author has done a great job by not allowing Timmy to move on and by making it look like Timmy's life depended on forgiving Beth and taking her back. Seems very realistic to me. Now make him beg for her forgiveness for delaying and that'll make it the best ever LW story of literotica.

Too fucking long, get on with it

He has already taken her back and now is insisting she gets over herself, admits her mistake so he can then accept being a cuck and feel like a winner... FUCK THIS.

Denny reports: "But I found out that she hasn't told anyone else. As you say, she hasn't said a word to her parents, she hasn't said anything at work, she's just bottled it all up, and it's destroying her."

No. This is not the case. Beth's father called Tim and told him that Beth said that Tim had kicked her out for no reason, that Tim had called her bad names for no reason, and heavily implied that Tim is a fucking asshole...which is exactly what her father called Tim. This is NOT a neutral silence. Beth said the same exact things to Denny and Phil.

I feel that the author is here continuing to sleaze towards RAAC by using exactly the same tactics that Beth uses. The author started this sleaze move by having Tim drop one of his ultimatums which a personality like Beth's can ONLY see as a success in her usual approach. Bad author! Bad, bad. Not for shifting towards RAAC, but for being sleazy about it.

Beth is become one of those LW cheating wives that cause the reader to wonder how in Hell the mc could live with that sort of world view for all those years. That causes some readers to consider revoking the author's poetic license.

LWlurker

I wonder if the author is trying to nauseate on purpose.. Is that the effect he is trying to extrude to readers with this?

The woman is just thinking of herself not her marriage. How can she hope to get back with her husband if she doesn't tell her parents? Our MC explained that many pages ago, he could never have a decent relationship with her parent with them thinking he was arsehole. Duh!

This Femdom agitprop has degenerated into a rambling, gossipy hash and rehash of the first part. Hmm, let’s see what the gardner has to say about this situation….

Could the author make his MC any more pathetic? I don’t think so. Chapter after chapter rehashing same old shit.

You are drawing this out, it’s good writing but in so many parts…..

Ok story and I want to see how it turns out, but I'm at the point of reading the first sentence of each paragraph and jumping back if I feel I missed something when I get to the next .. not jumping back as often as I expected.

This true me it could be compressed significantly without losing much...

And... Honestly how much can she care if she's making him out as the bag guy to everyone including her parents?