All Comments on 'TGI Chronicles Pt. 2 Ch. 06'

I continue to enjoy this story very much.

Boyd

Shifting sands, you have the characters changing personalities so often; I need a guide to keep up. Have a feeling; we are a long way from the finish line. Good job, keep up the good work. A fan always.

It would seem that Drew might be more than 'interested' in Davinia but is there any reason to suspect that he is in any way dangerous? I don't think so. But he could be a problem for them.

Now if Dave decides to leave the life of debauchery and become a married man will he be able to convince Davinia? Her mom indicated she is a time bomb but didn't really explain other than her last relationship.

Now don't tell me the T in TJ stands for Todd???

It would seem that Drew might be more than 'interested' in Davinia but is there any reason to suspect that he is in any way dangerous? I don't think so. But he could be a problem for them.

Now if Dave decides to leave the life of debauchery and become a married man will he be able to convince Davinia? Her mom indicated she is a time bomb but didn't really explain other than her last relationship.

Now don't tell me the T in TJ stands for Todd???

I am hooked! I have all sorts of ideas about where this may be going but which, if any, are close, I have no idea.

Keep them coming!

To many chapters and not a very good story.

"This is the first time I've ever tasted myself. I've never gone down on anyone after they've been in me.“

Huh? I can believe she’s never gone down on someone after they’ve fucked her, but I find it hard to believe she’s never tasted herself! Is she actually saying she’s never licked her fingers after masturbating?!

“I suggest that you don't say anything to Davinia.”

I think he SHOULD say something to Davinia, so that she can be prepared in case Drew makes some kind of a move.

Congrats. Good story. Four out of five. I am enjoying Part 2 much more than part one, although I liked part one. Perhaps I am just getting used to the author's style. I am amused by some comments that the author is too wordy. The deep detail on Dave and Tim's life outside their relationships with their women makes this interesting. There have been a few minor typos in the last few chapters, but nothing serious. I was wondering if Dav was cheating on Dave with Drew, but after this chapter I don't think so. Yet. An interesting idea is that of emotionally cuckolding your man which is what I think the author is playing with here. Dave's fight with Tim was also very realistic. They both have a lot of ammo to use on each other with is normal for friends. I look forward to reading more. Cheers Steve

The scene whereby the girls brokered the settlement of the argument between Tim and Dave was great writing, as good as it gets here or anywhere. Nicely done. I am shocked you dont write more. Are there any other forums where more stories are posted?

I would be lying if I told you I knew why but not as smooth as some of the ones that lead here just dunno why might just be my own internal insecurity looking forward to how you resolve it all but love the growing world you are building

Oh! I think I figured it out the tension is so high and ya know something is coming, but my ADHD bullshit makes that something I avoid, but I kinda like fighting, so I am conflicted in my conflict