All Comments on 'That Old, Familiar Feeling Ch. 01'

a very well written and very imaginable story - although not yet completed?

This grabbed my attention and held it. I enjoyed the development. there must be room to expand

unusual but very interesting story

Many fraternal organizations have strange rituals. This story is a new twist on many of the Knights. Both Monica and Garnet will benefit.

That was fun. Is there more to come?

I guess I forgot to mention...this is chapter one of six. Thanks everyone for the feedback!

and so It is. A very intriguing start to the six chapters promised.

You've established both characters with such apparent ease... It takes a great deal of skill to make something so complicated appear so easy!

The storyline is also believable. You unfolded it well as the chapter progressed.

As with all your stories, grammar, spelling and punctuation are "spot on," causing no distraction from the overall pleasure of reading.

Thank you for sharing this story. I look forward to seeing how it develops.

5* Jules

I mean it, full of wonder. You said it was in six parts so I'm waiting for the next.

Keep'em coming!

R.

Sci Fi

Fiction.

Cute

Good

Fabulous story!xx