All Comments on 'That Old Flame'

If my wife and I had to do this to get off we would just divorce, sorry but I didn't find this different, new, erotic or a good idea. Nothing in story to suggest yhis improved marriage or will stop. Husband is now just a watcher and wife a slut. How is that better?

Not only pitiful, it is ridiculous. Fantasy, unusual circumstances, innovation, experimenting -- all can be fodder for erotic literature. This "story" has nothing.