All Comments on 'That Rat Bastard'

....good job....

A bit rushed for me, but I love the kicker line about her mom... All in all a good offering.

I liked the beginning, but Denni is highly disappointing as a character since she's oh so perfect. You went a long way to show that the lead is a human being with feelings, good points and insecurities, but Dennie isn't.

Nevertheless, good idea.

Absolutely loved this story the ending was great and ya great story :D

You've given us a valuable lesson in this excellent little story: that everyone can be beautiful or handsome to someone. Keep up the good writing.

Though it does leave you with an opportunity to write a chapter 2. The last sentence does a proper way of filling in all that needs to be answered. 5💥's