All Comments on 'The 12 Days of Christmas'

You set the stage deftly and then carried on in fine style. Thank you for the effort!

A great story and perfect for the Holiday contest. Great work.

Ah... a juicy, well-set tale. Loved it. Kept me cumming!

Ms. HoneyDip

Very excellent story! I would love to be with them when they open their presents on Christmas morning!!

This story is H O T.

Not only was this one of the best stories I've read in a while, but you gave me a great idea for a gift. Thank you and keep up the great writing!!!

Outstanding story. I loved reading your story. I wish you would write again soon.

I especially like female submission, bondage, tantalization, and extreme orgasms, mixed in with lesbianism, or even better a young woman forced into submission by people who are skillful in forced orgasms and bringing the girl to sex addiction, via extreme orgasms, first straight, then lesbian. on a straight girl. But as time goes on she finds she is addicted to those extreme orgasms that come from men and women, she comes to not caring. She resists giving head and must be forced again and again, but all to quickly finds she likes giving so well she has becomes addicted to it. And she likes giving women head better than to men. After that she submits completely to a man or a woman equally, the more degrading it is the better she likes it. She is a slut and doesn't care, just as long as she has many orgasms allotted to her. This story is very good and very exciting to me.

I really like the teasing ;)

wow...nicely done..congrats...you are a very good writer!!

this was good except for the part where she was tied up, that part I had to skip through can't a writer write anything without using bondage no matter how light it is

Liked the light bondage and the whole 12 days of Christmas theme. But why wait?