All Comments on 'The 3 of Us Ep. 01'

Good start, but like Tommy you pre ejaculated us with 1 page.

Good start but to short. If all of your chapters are going to be this short, you might consider combining the chapters together like chapters 1 and 2, 3 and 4, 5 and 6, and so forth. In this way you can get some medium/descent sized entries to keep the audience satisfied.

Learn when to use "she" or "her".

Fun read.