All Comments on 'The Abbotts Ch. 02'

You continue to write great stuff.

This is some hot!!!!! writing. Bob are you drinking again??? If so have another and do part three. PLEASE!!!

Normally I don't like wives or husbands that cheat and deceive their mates. For some reason I don't feel that way about Amber.

Maybe because of the way her mother was. I can't blame her from getting away from that type of thing. Maybe because Jeff was such an ass. "They're my fraternity bothers." And then expecting her to put up with them. WTF.

Anyway, a story well written and a little different slant from JPB's normal.

Thanks for your hard work and keep em coming.

I bet Beverly is already doing Jason... and has for years... Just a feeling when he mentioned the married lady he was bedding. We will see won't we?

Can't help but wonder where it's going

My guess is that this is going to blow up in her face. I liked that this was done as a multi part story, with each chapter done form a different point of view. Looking forward to the conclusion.

I hope it all blows up in her face

Only just discovered this story, but I'll comment on this part before reading part 3. JPB has outdone himself in showing what a dirty, sneaky, conniving, skanky, bitch our Amber really is. Despite her BS about loving Bobby (and being smitten with him even before she knew he was rich), it is clear to this reader that she really only loves herself. There is one obvious plot hole, however. A star athlete and straight A student like Bobby would not be a beer-guzzling drunk who often gets bombed and sleeps until 10 AM. The latter does not fit the character as he was developed. Thanks for writing.

Always have an insurance policy. I am unhappy about Jason, that seems to border on unfaithfulness, but since it's an old relationship, I suppose we can overlook it, just to spare Deuce's feelings. Daddykins continues to do his best...

first chapter Amber said Booby does not eat pussy and this one he does, also at end of chapter one Amber was walked down the isle by father-this chapter her father was dead. Need to keep the story straight

Sadly the type of story that I am here for.

I didn’t think anything could be any worse than chapter one, but then I realized it was JPB. Amber is an unbelievable slut and dad Abbot needs to swing.

Good tale so far. Comments allover the place. Why does 26thNC hate the authors so? Not just JPB but others as well. It's not as if he has authored anything except bad mouthing in his critiques. LP

Didn’t like it at all.