All Comments on 'The Adventures of Nikki Nipples Nicastro Ch. 04'

Just gave it a zero that it deserves.

I got a bit fragmented at the end, but a good story. I enjoyed it as well as the previous chapters. Keep going!

I enjoyed this latest chapter very much. Thanks for posting it, and I hope you continue the story.

A Great read from one of the best writers on this site. Doing great Stormbringer....keep the hits coming and leave the haters in the dust where they all belong.

It would be interesting if you would get the husband into some surgery to fix his erection problems... That way he could get back at his brother for calling him little! :)

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You had me hooked at Nikki & father Jova. You should have kept him in the story by having him move in with her, kick her wimp husband out of her life for good, & Nikki becomming father jovas slut for life!!!.

It would have been a more erotic story!!

... "need his balls": "better dad THAN me" instead of "better dad then me"; and "WHERE it rubbed on the sheets" instead of "wear it rubbed". Regards,

Bobbie Sue Kindle

PS: I'm glad the camera thing got back and I'm amazed how you manage to add morale to something seen as immoral by most.

BAH !!

Wished you'd written more about Nikki and JUMA.

First of all,kudos on this nikki character...nice plot but dunno why Demetrios wouldn't suck a BBW when they're the best pussy to be ate.

How does the stench from this.like of shit not suffocate you at your computer?

All these GD stereotypes.