by gldngolfer
When you get a wake up call... There's nothing wrong with waking up.
Not uncommon at all to need attitude adjustment at SOME point in a relationship.
Good job!
You geuinely seem to believe that its not only perfectly normal maariage for a guy to spend every non working hour getting hammered, but that its a valid form of relaxation.
No. It's called alcoholism. If yout character is a real experience, you owe your wife serious repentence and yourself so m e time in AA.
Regardless what some people have to say about this story, I found it to be extremely entertaining, and somewhat humorous good job
"For all of you out there who didn't like these stories, that's OK. I knew it wouldn't be taken well by everyone and some of you have been pretty harsh in your criticism. I'm also aware that many of you disliked how I chose to end this tale. But I'm a sucker for a happy ending."
Works for me.
I found myself totally relaxed and enjoying these folks getting their lives and marriage back into sync. Nothing wrong with any of that at all. Thanks,
My true life story had some slight resemblance to this; but didn't end happily at all. But, like you, I am a sucker for a happy ending. I am left wondering why we say such hurtful things in the heat of the moment to the very person we love the most; why we show such little respect to them; why we humiliate them and belittle them in front of friends; and we do such cruel, unforgivable things to them? Excellent 5-* story.
I was surprised to find an update to those stories. I'm also glad the update is a happy one. I'm a sucker for a happy update ending . As a whole for the three parts I give FIVE STARS.
I liked the first one and was surprised there was a follow up. Pleased there was. Thanks for posting it
Makes up for ch. 2. As long as there is no cheating I am all for a happy ending. Well done.
Five Stars
A very pleasant read. My one big issue is that you start of the first story with "my wife of 25 years". But in the last story, their discussing having kids. After 25 years, I would have thought that would be a done deal. Maybe it should have been his wife of 5 years?
Wow! This story is so freaking awesome! I love it Thanks! ★★★★★ WOOF
Joke! Please Google Rednecks 911 call or another one Google Baz the cane toad both are on you tube
Love the way. things went she was Foolish. He was Brilliant in returning to her the Same as she Gave him Minus the Glue.
5* for a story that includes peoples emotions out of control but they come together because they really love each other.
Really, really, really, really liked this story! Pity all of Us can't take the outcome of the story " It's a sign" Let's all carry solvent for super glue! Anyway that's my Comment 5 Stars ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ WOOF!
I do appreciate your story, but I think she went too far between the super glue and the hen party. I would have divorced her.
sucked even less than the second one. Almost good though I too would have been gone after the super glue.
This three-parter was funny, poignant, witty, sad, and real. Little things are the worst enemies to a good marriage. As I approach my 50th anniversary I can attest to going through many good times and bad. We hate ourselves and we hate others. Love can win every time. Your stories do not have to be wham, bam, thank you, ma'am. And for those who don't like these stories, well, as a wise man said: "Fuck 'em if they can't take a joke."
This was funny but I've seen these escalating joke wars get out of hand. Very well handled.
I thought the three stories were well done - from a technical point of view. They played well for fictional stories on what's basically a porn site. And I think that you, the author, has to understand that "Anon" can get their jollies from being hyper critical. Not everyone has the same opinion and taking cheap potshots at an author's story can feed some little egos. Try not to take things personally. Some times marriages get saved. Sometimes they get destroyed. Most people here are looking for a grenade. Just saying.
Anons quit bitching? Why do you write? The story written in pieces, no explanation that it would be continued? The story came from your head so it's from your imagination. Just a little twisted.
Good writing but she should have been arrested for aggravated domestic abuse/battery and a sex crime and then divorced. Jokes are funny and harmless. Her crime was not. Yet another misbehaving female given zero consequences for her behavior.
You write them, we read them. We have no skin in the process so no right to bitch. Thanks for the story