All Comments on 'The Agency - Focus on Mom Ch. 01'

very erotic...looking forward to ch.02 and how his fantasy will come together....

I hope that he does get to have sex with his mother in the upcoming chapter. If determination mean anything then he should succeed.

A nice job of writing and editing.

Thanks for the read

Wow!! very nice. and well done. you did an excellent job as a new comer. great. first you have write a mother son story and second you have done it so hot attractive way. we the teen boys always have been fantasized about our mother that she could be a swimmer or actress or model, because mother is the closed female of us. good job, you must continue this. at next ch: you must show some hot anal sex between mom son and also spying on mother. mothers nudity is too important epacially her bare ass.

Please don't go ruining this great beginning with,

That couple going the predictable blackmail and forced route...

It derails any chance at a romance aspect or happy ending.

An interesting start than most of the incest stories at the Lit. I noticed that this is your first story - so welcome to the Lit and hope we see more stories from you,

Venus

u have a good perspective but should try to stay realistic. Write about teasing and "accidental" flashing. u have alot to offer

brilliant first story., do hope its not long till the next hot horny part. brilliant writing love it from start to finish . the agency focus on mom part one was such a horny very erotic to read love it.

LOL...patiently waiting for chapter two!

great start but $2,500 is a lot of money!!!

Hello and welcome to Literotica. You have a nice start to your story and with a perspective that is interesting since you are a Mom writing about a son. Keep going with your writing and will look forward to more.

hope part 2 comes soon

looking forward to your next chapter!

Please don't listen to the selfish, self-centered MCBTWS. He is just an angry individual suffering from feelings of inadequacy looking for a target, trying to bring someone else down so he can feel better about his measly little life. His response is no way to encourage more writing from a new author. Keep writing!!!!

Looking forward to read Chapter 2