All Comments on 'The Ambassador Ch. 01'

by steviet

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
silly silly white boy

She never be the same, Thank Goodness. Love the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great!

Well written. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

BazzzBazzzover 17 years ago
Good sex

This story was pure raw sex. Just what this website is all about. I would work on developing a better plot though as then you will have a masterpiece

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Nice job

I enjoyed it. If others didn't, why the need to tear you down. Sad sad people on here. Comments facility should be taken down for good. Little dicks, if you have something to say then write your own story

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good stuff!

Keep writing Steviet. Very arousing story. Don't listen to the negative crap.

BazzzBazzzabout 16 years ago
Had to re-read

I came back and re-read this one after reading your newest The Resort. You are very good at writing sex scenes. I have wanted to write a story surrounding a mascerade or costume ball. I hopw you don't mind me "stealing" the premise. Again well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Please make a follow up sequence to this excellent story

1WiseSage1WiseSageover 6 years ago
Total Crap

Ambassadors are ALL married. Even black ones. They certainly are NOT going to cheat on their wives in a mission country especially with some cheap gutter slut-whore nothing during a public function. And , of course, an Ambassador would NEVER attend a public function such as a New Year's party, but only a political, diplomatic party where cheap, gutter slut-whores are clearly excluded.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
It's been a long time, but will there ever be a chapter 2?

I loved the story, enjoy all of your stories. Looks like you've been inactive on here for a long time, but if you're reading this, hope you'll consider a comeback and do chapter 2s for this one and The Resort

BogieraBogieraabout 1 year ago

Would love to finally see a second chapter to this one......

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

As a non- native I have problems with spelling errors. They confuse me and make it dufficult to understan what is being descripted. They're×their×there: all mixed up. Accept×except. Woman×women. So many words that I have to read more then once to get the meaning of the phrase. Writters cokud be more careful about these things.

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