All Comments on 'The Amnesia of Beth's Father Ch. 03'

This has to be the best series ever! Give us more! Give us more!

it needs a Follow-up do the Girls Cindy & Beth get Pregnant. Does Rita and Beth get rid of Cindy?

fantastic addition to your collection of stories here on Lit. Way to go, seth, you really know how to ramp up the hotness!

liked it bur could have done without the "friend". She seems to have taken over where she should be more of a guest in the house. Father should put wife and daughter first.

.. VERY UNNECESSARY! REALLY!

Cindy ruined it! Little bitch doesn't know her place & talks too much.

Just not Cindy Cindy ruined it.

I loved all of it even when Cindy was starting to join but in the end it was just too far and she just ruined it. I was pissed off about that but the story had a way of sucking you in and was amazing, if not for Cindy it would of been perfect!

Great story best I have seen in a while.

got a little confusing when mum came home

think you made a typo or two by putting Cindy instead of Beth and Beth instead of Cindy

and just wondered how did he know the wife's Name was Rita when she came home He thought she was his sister and her name was not mention or did I miss something,

anyway did not spoil anything keep writing

Not even close to believable so far.

Bill S.