All Comments on 'The Ample Patient'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
ouch

Danm! That was HOT!

I definitely want to meet someone like that, Even if that whole scene was just a little unrealistic it was still fun!

Best wishes on your future ventures,

Amatorius.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
a very good story ...

.. well-written.. especially concerning

her unspoken thoughts . About 1/2 way

through reading it , I was sensing a

surprise ending ... along the lines of

the doctor and the stripper having set

Martha up .. tricking her into jerking

him into a cup or something in the name

of a thorough med exam ... that could

have maybe been a less obvious conclusion

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
One of the best ....

One of the best stories in this site and others, thought the ending could have been little better (with the doctor). The length also could be shortened to keep the momentum up. But I loved the narrative. Way to go !

zex95966zex95966about 11 years ago
=P

Got me all hot and bothered.

Definitely adding you to my favorites.

tomrelaxedtomrelaxedover 8 years ago
Great story

While it's a very sexy story, what really makes it 5 stars is that it's also really funny! Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
great erotic story filled with more than just humor

This is about as good a huge penis story as I have ever read anywhere. Well written, great story line, and keeps the reader hungry to keep on reading every word. Would love to know if somehow it was true. Makes you wonder if any woman could take twelve inches!!!

And makes any man want to be blessed with such a giant cock if this

was true. Thanks to the writer for using such skill to write this wonderful submission.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
The Ample Patient

There is no way a woman can get through med school and pass the board and be this naieve and/or stupid. Same thing goes for your receptionist/nurse. And also your ability to maintain a train of thought. Five pages could easily be three if you weed out all that is wrong. One/half star.

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