by patty_parker60
Always On Point.
You're painting pictures in my head, am loving it.
U inspire me, Dear! Part 2 has been submitted; I expect it to be available soon. XOXOXOXOXOXO
this bitch is OFF THE CHAINS! More of the SAME FANTASTIC WRITING
It's been published in the ANAL CATEGORY...ENJOY (AND VOTE!!)
Well-written anal scene. Powerful and and raw and memorable. A proofreader may have caught a few typos/syntax errors. This is the kind of thing you'll like if you like this kind of thing. 5 stars.
I'm referring to those who submitted constructive criticism or compliments
I have a small favour to ask: one of the key methods one has of gauging his/her progress/digression as a writer is the comments (both positive and negative) submitted by the readers, and the rating given. Once you have finished reading, please comment and or rate the submission, preferably both. Thank you in advance! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
I give it 5 stars, and only wish it could be more...has it ALL: LESBIAN ANAL, DOMINATION, SUBMISSIVE MOTHER, BIG BOOBIES (AND ASS), STRAPON SEX
perhaps: Patty 'PARKER?'...inquiring minds are dying to know!
That so many have taken the time to rate and comment on this story. The feedback really does assist me in tailoring these tales to suit my audience.
You have GOT to extend these stories that is pushing too many buttons to stop now Damn ! Thank You
As an ass infatuated bi male, I'd love to hear how women find stories aggressive anal to appealing. Any takers‽