All Comments on 'The Anal Travails of Patty Jones Ch. 01'

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TerraKhanTerraKhanover 5 years ago
Keep 'em Cumming

Always On Point.

You're painting pictures in my head, am loving it.

patty_parker60patty_parker60over 5 years agoAuthor
TK

U inspire me, Dear! Part 2 has been submitted; I expect it to be available soon. XOXOXOXOXOXO

TerraKhanTerraKhanover 5 years ago
Yes!!!

I Hope They Approve It Soon. Can't Wait.

karin_n_karinna1karin_n_karinna1over 5 years ago
'Patty Jones'...

this bitch is OFF THE CHAINS! More of the SAME FANTASTIC WRITING

patty_parker60patty_parker60over 5 years agoAuthor
Part 2 of this Tale

It's been published in the ANAL CATEGORY...ENJOY (AND VOTE!!)

jolicamarillojolicamarilloover 5 years ago
'PATTY JONES"

Give us MORE, 'Patty Jones"...that's an ORDER!!

jayjaymarinjayjaymarinover 5 years ago
Patty Jones!

P-a-t-t-y J-o-n-e-s!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
5 stars

Well-written anal scene. Powerful and and raw and memorable. A proofreader may have caught a few typos/syntax errors. This is the kind of thing you'll like if you like this kind of thing. 5 stars.

amy_tbtb1amy_tbtb1over 5 years ago
I agree

5 Star effort...only because 5 is the limit

patty_parker60patty_parker60over 5 years agoAuthor
Thank U all

I'm referring to those who submitted constructive criticism or compliments

patty_parker60patty_parker60about 5 years agoAuthor
Please COMMENT & RATE my tawdry little tale

I have a small favour to ask: one of the key methods one has of gauging his/her progress/digression as a writer is the comments (both positive and negative) submitted by the readers, and the rating given. Once you have finished reading, please comment and or rate the submission, preferably both. Thank you in advance! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

jolicamarillojolicamarilloabout 5 years ago
Excelente!

Excellent!

ample_annieample_annieabout 5 years ago
TRULY A WONDERFUL THING: A MOTHER'S LOVE!

I give it 5 stars, and only wish it could be more...has it ALL: LESBIAN ANAL, DOMINATION, SUBMISSIVE MOTHER, BIG BOOBIES (AND ASS), STRAPON SEX

danilowelldanilowellabout 5 years ago
Patty 'JONES', hmmm?

perhaps: Patty 'PARKER?'...inquiring minds are dying to know!

patty_parker60patty_parker60about 5 years agoAuthor
So grateful

That so many have taken the time to rate and comment on this story. The feedback really does assist me in tailoring these tales to suit my audience.

briget_beebriget_beealmost 5 years ago
Love me some PATTY JONES

That Daughter of Hers is a rough customer!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Too Nasty

You have GOT to extend these stories that is pushing too many buttons to stop now Damn ! Thank You

Client8Client8over 3 years ago
A puzzlement

As an ass infatuated bi male, I'd love to hear how women find stories aggressive anal to appealing. Any takers‽

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

excellent

lookerringlookerring5 months ago

Wonderful , descriptive and gripping

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Hi, it's Patty! Mother of Twins (whom are also my LOVERS) Blonde , 36EE-30-42...Born in Wattford, UK. Some of my 'tales' are autobiographical (thinly-veiled); many are simply my very fertile imagination running amok. I moderated a yahoo.com site which no longer exists as yaho...