All Comments on 'The Aquisition'

by Jane_the_Slut

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kiwi_subslutkiwi_subslutalmost 5 years ago
Lovely!

Lovely story thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
great warm story

would love a follow-up, although this stands on its own too. A day 2 or seeing a relationship develop would be great.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Really great work!

Loved the story, especially how much you were able to build the story quickly while still providing enough depth so that the characters were real and not just one dimensional.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
More!!

I do hope this becomes a series - I need to know more of Mia's week with shane! <3

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Absolutely Beautiful!

It’s absolutely flawless, the details, emotions such a plausible picture you’ve painted of this couple enjoying each other.

Tess (UK)

sexyvpsexyvpalmost 4 years ago
Love it!

You really have to continue this story.

usemeanytimeusemeanytimeover 3 years ago

Wow! More please....day 2..3...4...5..6..7...MORE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What an absolutely delightful little sex pet Mia is proving to be. I among many others would love to read more of her service to Shane.

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