All Comments on 'The Art Of Desire Ch. 01'

Be very proud of yourself and mabey one day your writing will pay the bills. Very descriptive but not in a boring way.. Could have been a little more "Dirty" in the sex scene but mabey thats just me... Good luck

I have never read prose before that was such exquisite poetry~! Your way with words has to have derived from a poetic soul. I found myself bending to the rhythm of your sentences, not rhyming, but free verse. It is remarkable how you do that.

Thank you so much, Dizzylia. Oh yes, I enjoyed the sensuality of the story, too.

Wait, there's more. I haven't read the second chapter yet.

Alexa

There has been so much commentary about this story lately, I just had to come find out for myself. I decided to start at Chapter 01 in order to better understand it and get a feel for the characters, I am not disappointed, it is very good. Samantha and Meaghan are HOT and even though Samantha instigated the lovemaking, I loved the way Meaghan took control with such finesse.

*Now for the next Chapter*

You build the characters well and the plot takes some time to set the scene; I much prefer a slow build up!

Just amazing

Such an awesome beginning!

L

Now that's the way kick off a steamy love story. Your stories sizzle. Dizzylia😍

5🌟's

Jumping on every opportunity might bite you in the ass …. We may can argue and hubbys business trip is involving some pleasuring as well, but …… ….. ok the girls became touchy and kissy and hopefully the morning after is as cute as the evening was

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