All Comments on 'The Assignment Ch. 03'

amazing:) i really love this story.. i can't wait to read more:)

This was amazing!! I was so excited to read that Caleb and Annie are FINALLY together...well more together (finally she is a vampire) lol

Oh I can't wait for the next meeting with Mara and her vampire, especially after that very sweet gesture with the pics and jewelry :) hehe

Write fast please!!!

You did it again! This was fantastic and I particularly liked Demetri and Mara’s stormy relationship. I can tell she is going to give him a chase, as evident by her stubborn reaction to his house. Loved it! You really are quite talented and I can’t thank you enough for sharing your stories with us! I will wait patiently for the next chapter : -)

Wonderfully done. I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. You are a superb writer. As always, thank you for sharing your talent with us

Kate

i truly love this story, i can't wait to read more on how Demetri is changing, not to mention how Mara is no longer scared to death of him...lol i think meeting Annie, helped her quite alot in how to deal with him.

That was the awesomest!!!! Written by true brilliance!!! AWWWESOOOME!!!! I liked it alot.

I really hate the way Annie acts with all the slapping and what not. Its really high handed

yayy great story. cant wait till the next installment.

AWWWESOOOME!!!!

I liked the relationship that was built between mara and demetri the only thing is that wish that you would focus on them a little more. I feel that you have to move the pace a little faster with mara's relationship with him! I have to say that you are one if my favorite authors. Please keep up the steady pace you have with the stories! You leave me in utter dispare when you don't have any new stories! Good luck!

I also thought Annie's conversation with Demetri was high-handed - obnoxious even. Though kind, her angry outbursts seem more like that of a nine year old or a soap opera star rather than a grown woman.

I hope Mara's personality starts to differ from Annie's a little more in the next chapters. The way her relationship with Demetri is developing is great; I'm so excited to see more of them in the next chapter!

I loved the story and am glad you had Caleb finally change Annie! Now maybe you can get back to Demetre's story I also liked the relationship that was building between Mara and Demetri! I am looking forward to reading more and hope you post more chapters very soon!

I loved the changing scene. It was so beautiful. I'm really enjoying this story.

loveeee the story but..... i dnt want mara to "fall in love" with demetri right away i want him to chase here a little bit it'll be more intriguing that way... just a subjection :]

I loved it so romantic I laughed my ass off when she slapped demetri just like sookie stackhouse slapping eric in true blood season 2! to add a little more conflict what if Demetri has to rescue Mara at the very end from one of the council guys who believes she must be eliminated protecting their secret at all costs once she is captured that would be the defining moment in him realizing I can't loose her I love her.

Just an idea I had running around in my brain once again I loved it

when are you gonna post chapter 4!!!!! i've been checking everyday for the whole week!!!!! i usually doesnt take you this long to post another chapter!!

pleaseeeee the wait is killing meeeee!!!

It's submitted! I promise you lol! Please check my Bio for updates because I do use it. The Earth Day Contest is causing chapters to take longer to be posted. So it could be possibly Thursday or Friday before it's up. But it is coming :-)

I'm loving it so far. Hope you can update soon. Wish you had ended this chapter with more about Mara and Demetrie though. Still really liked it though :)

Very sweet how you did the whole conversion thing. It was real sweet for him to set up the room and do it where they first made love. Good job!

why does everyone get to abuse demetri? i feel sorry for him and if i was his woman, would not find others beating up on him attractive.

this annie girl is starting to get annoying.

I love your stories. You have a lot of really long run-on sentences, though, that take away from the story telling. If you were ever to resubmit your work, that's what I think you should work on. I can't wait to keep reading! 5 Stars!

as great as it was to finally have caleb turn annie and for them to have a happy ever after, i felt this character was entirely about caled and annie, and not enough about demitri. On a positive note, so far so very interesting.

I agree that the Caleb / Annie scene seemed a little out of place in this story, but it was so damned well written that i find i don't care, LOL. I also find myself wondering what would happen if Dimitri ever decided, friendship or not, he wouldn't let Caleb punch him anymore without retaliation. Speaking from a male perspective if a friend punched me in the face he better be ready to reap what he sews.

Once again Annie wore purple? Calling it aubergine still made it purple (what is in a name...?) Anyway, I think it was a nice place to put Annie and Caleb's story. If you've read the first series you know the author likes to have several stories/couples going on at once, this is an easy way to do this when its a shorter story. Good work!

With a vamp as sensitive and tender and fucking amazingly hot as Caleb, I sure as hell wouldn't mind being turned into a vampire! Especially if it meant ridiculously hot sex like that! Hahaha Great stuff JazCullen! Your work in the NonHuman category has led me down a new path of literature on this website!

no words....just you r the best!

Moving things along nicely, looking forward to the next chapter. All that slapping, and Demitri not being allowed to retaliate however, is a little tedious I'm afraid. I do not see two thousand year old creatures behaving quite that way. Still, a very entertaining read. Next chapter now!

It's like Beauty and the Beast....Demetri and Mara. They hate each other, but things start to change! Love it.

I love it.

You have woven a lot of beautiful pieces into this chapter, from the fierceness of D&M to the delicateness of C&A. Both compliment each other well and I cried at the end (yes, I'm a crier lol)

DAAAMMMMNNN!!! This was the second best HOT SEX scene with Caleb and Annie....I loved the other one when you described his ability to keep stroking and to give her multiple orgasms in the previous set of stories...told you HOT SEX!!

But hell...looking for a great orgy scene or written close friends swapping partners scene from you in one of your stories...Yooouuuu Can Do It! You can still love your soulmate and have sex with others...it has been proven throughout the centuries before it became consensual on both parts. :-)

Anyway, GREAT descriptions on the sex, and I get it why you guys give us so much character build up...so one can become invested in the sex scenes. Kensi wai and Arrogato sensi!!!

I had been hoping for a little more dramatic transition :(

thank god it wasn't another of those overly dramatic transitions..gave off a more peaceful feel rather than a holy shit i might die feel which is horribly over used..sheer brillience..love ur work thus far..

This was a beautiful scene and I agree wit both anonymous it was nice to see a not so dramatic transition. You made it so very romantic sensual sexy and beautiful. I was expecting more dramatic just because that's what is always done. I'm not complaining at all. You have such unique writing and very sexy and emotional stories. Beautiful job

So personally I'm not for the over-the-top transitions either unless the context is right for as we see in your later stories. However, it is disconcerting how fast you make them happen. Personally it just doesn't make sense that something that changes you on a biological, and even spiritual level as in the case with the wolves, would happen so quickly. I mean it doesn't have to some of these long, drawn-out, transitions that take months to happen as we sometimes see but at least not have it be instant. In your transitions to a werewolf, it takes at least a bit of extra time for a female's body to be able to become pregnant which makes sense that certain aspects just take some time to change. Therefore, I argue that you should allow a bit of extra time for the full transition into a vampire. I know we're talking about different species here and maybe a genetic change vs a more virus-like change but I would still like a change that is not so...snap-of-the-fingers. If you ever decide to do some revisions to these stories in preparation for publishing this is a suggestion that I recommend you consider. Your stories have evolved to have such depth to them and you are one of my two authors on this site right alongside whitesabertooth but this is one aspect of them that just bothers the hell out of me, haha.

SPOILER

I'm still waiting for what you have in store for Liam ;) I am quite curious about his character. By the way, I don't suppose these characters are in any way influenced by those of Tamora Pierce?

Nikki

I only meant to read a couple of stories but I started reading the assignment ch. 01. Now I have to keep reading maybe until I have read all your work. You are an exceptional writer. Are you published?

Maybe you should let your male characters have something of a backbone. I mean I can understand it is kinda cute how they act tough and then back down before their women but do you really think a real man is characterized by a masculine exterior but without any real leadership skills or any backbone ? Is that what you want ? Because some of the most masculine looking guys I know are actually gay. Just saying. And please dont equal all that pseudo masculine chest thumping for real masculinity. Real man dont have any business to engage in cockfights every 5 minutes. I think you should reevaluate all that.

And just a little technical note: 'Bitchslapping' refers to a pimp slapping his bitch (whore) not a bitch slapping a man. And either way is a 'bitchslap' a backhand strike, not a normal (feminine) slap to the face. I can garantee you notice the difference if you are ever on the receiving end.

kiss my ass please bitch !!

Beautiful!!!!!

Honestly I think a real man IS characterized by a tough exterior and a soft interior. A real man is someone who can handle himself in a fight, but knows when to admit defeat as well. A real man is also someone who treats his woman right, and that takes romance and a good amount of kindness and caring. I'm a woman, and that's what I believe a real man is and I wouldn't accept anything else.

Amen to that , Sister!

I am new to your storie and they are great my wife and I both read them and are fans. I am puzzled by some comments about how real men should act I wonder if some readers have trouble separating reality from fiction the last time I checked there were no vampires who needed to act like real men. You rock keep doing what your doing

I've come back to these stories time and time again reading them multiple times and still cannot get enough! So beautiful and intricate; wonderfully well done!

Extraordinary ...... Caleb and rhianna, the becoming one page , breathtaking, not the sex the softness the emotions the feelings the love ....... For mara it will be a tougher ride, she might be save as being protected, but trust is something very special

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Even Rhianna seems like a nasty piece of work here. When you hear a friend has just torturtured a woman almost to death, wanting to just slap him in the face isn't a reasonbale response, and the fact that Demetri healed her afterwards is no excuse. The trauma from torture remains far longer than any physical harm.