All Comments on 'The Babysitter'

It would be a great way to end the story by saying how much she was paid ;)

Another great story Magica. Keep up the writing

I liked this story although I'm not too fond of her first time being with a married man. The dialogue and the build up and the sex was great though.

great please continue the story line

You are a good writer Magica!

Was a good story--liked the buildup and the erotic details

That was amazing! One of your hottest stories yet, which is really saying something!

I liked it a lot! Good tension building, believable story - great! I especially liked him asking her "permission" to touch himself. Maybe give Marie a bit more hesitation in the beginning next time, before she is swept away by her own feelings.

Great story! im pretty sure she made $280 including the $100 he gave her, but I might have counted wrong..

An interesting plot/story line, and both were willing participants, BUT, he used her need for tuition money to persuade her.

The story gets a five IF he pays her; a 1 if he does not. I'll wait for a correction or continuation to vote. SOON.

What a cheap bastard

The money will be there for sure in the future no doubt. Interesting the wife knew he was going to fuck the sitter. Hmmmmm!!!

You said that Jack had vasectomy. How can he cum then?

From a virgin to a whore in one night totally unbelievable yeh they both wanted it but he manipulated her with money she was desperate for an he knew how desperate

Wonderful story., 10 stars! It's a shame he had a vasectomy, after college, she could be his wife and mother to his kids and the new babies. His "wife" sounds like a real bitch, and he could use a woman/mother, that loved him, and the kids, a REAL wife and mother... Please write another chapter, where she shows him what a wife/mother really is!