All Comments on 'The Babysitter Ch. 02'

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GentlytwistedGentlytwistedover 7 years ago
Took me by surprise

I was certainly not expecting this when I logged in the other day! Needless to say, I was almost completely ecstatic, and read it right away. And was I disappointed? Hell no.

So glad to see that things are going so well for what has to be one of my favourite Literotica couples. Must admit, though, I kinda preferred the two in their original roles - where Tori was a lot smarter than, able to outwit the younger girl.

The_Seventh_7The_Seventh_7over 4 years ago
A happier ending

The first chapter had me kind of discomforted with the trauma, I'm pretty sensitive to that kind of stuff. However, this story finished with a blaze of passion and glory. Good job and thank you.

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