All Comments on 'The Bait'

It is seldom that a story in this category actually involves me in any way. They are trite and formulaeic-yours was a truly lovely exception and enjoyable on sexual and non-sexual levels. It illuminated a few things for me regarding my own curiosity with submission. I hope you are moved to write many more stories.

Keep going, but you will need to be able to learn your abc's and the difference between affect and effect!

I really enjoyed this story & would love to read more of these characters.

Well done, like the other poster, I don't often read this type of story but yours was wonderful! Keep up the good work..

bravo for the second one also...encore!! encore!!

stormie69

I have to say that this story captivated me. I dont normally read stories involving BDSM but my oh my....MMMMM.

DELICIOUS!!

I need more of this couple!

An excellent story, and very well written. One of the best by a very talented writer.

Mmm that was delious! i hope there is another chapter soon to come.

This story felt REAL. I really appreciated the balance between the characters and I'm glad Nick's character wants to act in a way that respects Allysa's character despite what he's doing to/with her. Great Story!

Loved it one of the best in this catagory

I love it! it was so amazing..I loved how detailed it was

When I usually read a bdsm story I don't really care much about romance. But this story like the other commenters really captivated me. Very hot! Also I agree that the characters seem very realistic and believable. I hope you give us a lot more.

wow, this story is really nice! I like your choice of words!

All right well all know bdsm is not usually so loving but holy shit your story made my cunt drip and my heart sing I mean damn u rock

This was a beautiful piece. I would suggest an editor though. It is obvious you were fullen taken in with delivering such a wonderfully captivating plot. Maybe leave the editing part to someone else. :) Well done.

I loved it.