All Comments on 'The Barbecue Party Ch. 01'

just a great story!please continue

Well done!

No smooth flow to story and format is too choppy. Please get an editor, three stars generously.

Prim and proper looking Japanese milf with a slutty perverted side. so hot. Also, you also cant write about how slutty and perverted she was/is and all the men she's previously fucked without telling us more about it. tease. I can just imagine what all her previous boyfriends got to do to her, having an innocent looking asian mom willing to become a slut for them, she would've been rutted and used good.

Hoping Eri continues slutting it up. Hoping Sean doesn't mind sharing. I can just imagine the frustration and horniness he felt watching her revolving door of men. Same could probably be said for Hibiki.

Definitely terrific read

Badass story well written too, look forward to more from you!

I need the next chapters of this story so bad!!!

Wierd!

Hope the son finds out and abandons both of them. I was like whatevs till the end when she lied and said she wanted to learn Mario Kart to hide the smile after she was getting raw dogged by her son's friend.

I want a story with consequences where the son isn't just "okay" with it because "happiness".

need more of Eri being a slut and fucking other guys

Very Hot Story!!! Young White Cock and Mature Asian Pussy is the perfect match.

Need more of the asian milf fucking other guys

Asian women are hot but this story is too cluttered and rambling for my taste.

Hot teenage boy fantasy.

Looking forward for your next chapter on Eri's conquest on young Nerds.

Hopefully Eri got knocked up