by okayjack
Count on it it's trash. That cuck only reads trash. Moving on.
At least OOAA has the balls to sign his name. I did find more errors in this than the others, but I like them all even if I personally wouldn't want to be a cuckold. I do enjoy both reading and writing about this and many other subjects. Anyway, OKAYJACK, keep up the good work. Oh yeah, the glaring error, Irene became Maggie early on. Must admit I wonder about that. Could Maggie be the real live woman from your past?
Your anglicized name of that gorgeous god Athena put me off. There are a thousand and more beautiful spanish girl's names. Irene sits well on a fair skinned lass - hence my inability to picture the slutty dark cheating wife...so 3*
This was poorly written, regardless of subject matter. Starting with the name changes. Not a single clever thing. Not a single decent, likeable character. It simply wasn't interesting or entertaining to read.
Masterbatory dreamings of a male virgin junior high school student!
No stars.
IRL, a selfish,narcissistic cunt would deserve to get her face slapped and her ass to be bounced off of the curb. This wife is now just a "female", no longer a woman or lady,so she doesn't warrant any special protection any longer.