All Comments on 'The Beach House Ch. 02'

this one may be your best ever, if i could only get my mom to read it

Excellent story! Very hot! But just a technical question: The thirg from the last paragraph begins: "after a two hour answering session...". Is there anything missing like a paragraph or something? Just curious.

Me and My Sister Love This Story! Keep It Goin!

Good story - she's one sexy bitch and deserves to be fucked hard.

fantastic story five stars from me

I liked this one.

As always, keep it up, the writing that is.

your words make the story feel real, love to read what happen next

Linda

i had myself 20 times before the end

I gave it a five. The final fight between father and son didn't help the story line in my view. Maybe the whore could have blown him away or maybe he could have been found on a trash pile behind a joint. (I knew a man this happened to.) Anyway, keep up the good work.

I agree with the previous commenter about the final confrontation-not necessary. Story ended a bit early without him getting her final offering.

But, L.A., I figure that you wanted him to find out about it just because he was such a despicable person. I am sorry his killer got caught. Thank you for writing this good story. Good luck on the paying story, I'm sure you will do well on it.

Loved the story. Glad the asshole dad got what was coming to him. Only hope it was the hooker who had the pleasure of shooting him.

This beach story is not too bad considering it is just another take off on that well worn theme of mom and son at the beach. These stories are good if they have some hint of being believable and the everyday normal (?) reader can believe them snd relate. But a hot mom/wife going over two years without fucking is pushing the limits of believability and we, the readers, lose interest. Having a lot of incestual fucking is good and gets our attention and holds it, but it has to remain believable. Literotica has a great many first time writers who could really crank out some good writing if they could just get beyond.the shock value of overusing the "pussy, fuck, and the much over used CUNT" words. Think about it, how many times do you really say "cunt while fucking or in foreplay" . Thanks for letting me share.

Very nice. Looking forward to reading more of your stories

I like the story. AAA++

The buid ip and sex was hot! I amost cheered when he punched yhe old man. I hate bullies...5+