All Comments on 'The Bed was Shaking'

Very well written just not into the whole pissing thing. Short if that I liked it a lot and reminds me of my sister and I and the things we done. 4*

Not what I was expecting and not something I would exactly enjoy but it was rather good for a short to-the-point story, considering it's your first submission even more so. Hope to see more from you though a more vanilla setting might not hurt.

4*

Keep it coming! There's not a lot of this in the incest category and I'm sure there are plenty of people like me loving it

I loved it, really turned me on at the end with the piss in the ass.

Me and my wife have tried but couldn't get flow.