by BrettJ
You are one of my favorite writers. I hope you continue this story but if not it was great. Can't wait to read more from you. You are a 5 star author ☆★☆★☆
A perfect ending to a very loving and hot story.
Thanks for the great read.
OUTSTANDING STORY, YOU DID NOT MISS A BEAT. ALL IN ALL I GUESS ALLEN WAS AN ASSHOLE. TO PASS ON A WOMAN LIKE LIZ. GOOD THINGS DO HAPPEN, AND THAT DAY IT HAPPEN FOR PAUL.MOST OF YOUR STORIES HAVE BEEN GOOD, BUT THIS ONE IS YOUR BEST. KEEP YOUR STORIES COMING, THEY SEEM TO BE THE LIGHT AT THE END OF THE TUNNEL. THANK YOU...........PS..... A PART TWO WOULD BE NICE, THEY HAVE JUST GOTTEN STARTED..................LAROC OF AGES
Please continue ....... must have more....need part 2, part 3,, part 4, ect...... pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!
As usual you have outdone yourself once again.We're hoping for a second chapter of course.Keep up the good work Brett. Ciao and good luck. Joe
So poorly written as to be considered a formula piece. You can do better.
What a hot mother/son story. I really liked that she put on some sexy black stocking before making love to her son and he got to fill her womb with his seed. Please write more chapters with mum in stockings and heels.
I think it was fairly realistic, has a good rhythm. Just wish it was longer.
i loved so real to life, a turn on to any mom that has a son like that and also to a son that has a mom like her
so hot and wonderful they can enjoy the sex together
I do enjoy a good mother-son incest story, and you sort of hint that she might just get preggo, like icing on the cake for my imagination! SO Taboo!
Hope to see some additional chapters!
"Liz screamed so hard that Paul was sure the chandelier in the room shook. Her body contracted around his cock as her orgasm came over her like a tidal wave. He allowed himself to follow suit, not worrying that they hadn't used protection. He knew she had taken precautions with Allen in the past."
Super! And my guess is she knew what she was doing from the get-go on the protection issue.
Isn't the imagination a fun tool to play with?
Great erotic, sensual story, very exciting to read, far too short; more chapters, please, soon!
Party had setting for a nice erotic build-up over the dancing etc. but ended up being pretty abrupt & too quick to get to the sex.
my mum never dressed up for me but used to get into my bed when dad worked away,i was a teenager and the inevitable happened with me releasing a load into mum and she got pregnant with my child.dad thought that it was his and so the secret has now gone to the grave.
This author never disappoints. It's so great when a boy introduces his big stiff prick to his mother's cunt. In my opinion, a mother's cunt is the receptacle nature provides for her boy's hard on and all the rich warm semen he's got in his hot young balls. His mother's cunt is where a boy's potent sperm belongs.
but you left out the entry. That is one the best parts of a mom-son story.
Story ended too abruptly, like someone walked in & he had to end the story. Kind of like Coitus Interruptus!!
Agreed with the rest. Story end too sudden, never truly give account of what actually to the Mother and Son.
I'm a supporter of your story and this one is something like "wham, bam thank you..... ". Hope there is a chapter 2 to detail out the account.
The story and the sex was good but I wish you had described their bodies better. I like to have that visual in my head while I read a story.
It was too short! I don't need a complete book, but this was a great story that deserves more lead-up, and definitely a much less abrupt ending!
The second time around. I've been reading your stories all over again and still can't put them down.
I enjoyed this story and the way it unfolded. The only spoiler for me is the use of mommy. Not only had they moved on to Liz and Paul, but it's a term for a child not an adult. Other than that, a nice read.