All Comments on 'The Big Bang'

I kept waiting for Beth to explain why. Otherwise, very enjoyable

Delighted to see more from you lately, E -- please keep it [& us!] up !!

Great story, Beth sure got things going. Kind of thought that Bill would stick it in Linda's pussy and DP her, so Beth would get Linda to eat her cum filled cunt.

Sometimes nerds have all the fun.

Because that made about as much sense as all this drivel.

Really want there to be a part 2. Which will finish off with why BETH choose Larry.

This story was generally very good as a "First Time" story. If it had continued in that genre, or ended at just that, it would have been fine. It fell apart, both as a story and in a literary sense once the group sex started.

I'd love to see what made Beth target Lawrence in the first place.

Wonder what else Beth has in store for him.

Also I suspect that this won't be the end of Beth fucking with Bill.

Make believe is fun. I guess the only other thing left would be for Beth to have Larry spread her ass cheeks wide and thoroughly lick and suck her filthy tight asshole until she came. Rimming the taste right out of her tangy little wrinkled bunghole.

What a nice way to lose your V-card

Great job!